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pompey01

July 6 - food glorious food

Jul 07, 2016 23:58

Title: Case of the Speckled Box (Part 3/3) (aka “Parsley, Basil, Dandelion, and Time ( Read more... )

great mouse detective, watson's woes, july writing prompt, sherlock holmes

Comments 8

okapi1895 July 8 2016, 04:14:14 UTC

Oh, poor Dawson. Woe indeed. But I do like that you added a cure at the end.

pompey01 July 8 2016, 04:35:05 UTC

I am just grateful that the prompt matched up so well with the real treatment!

laurose8 July 8 2016, 04:24:29 UTC

This last chapter is up to the very high standard of the other two. Thanks, and I'm so glad it ended - well, fairly all right.

I love the guinea pigs bit. Also, the subtitle.

pompey01 July 8 2016, 04:36:07 UTC

Thank you! (and don't worry -- offscreen Dawson makes a full recovery.)

As for the subtitle, how could I resist? ;)

gardnerhill July 8 2016, 06:30:37 UTC

Whew. So Mum was right - eat your greens!

thesmallhobbit July 8 2016, 20:39:08 UTC

Having just caught up - I thoroughly enjoyed this tale. Very glad Dawson recovered without any long term affect.

ladyblank July 8 2016, 22:33:31 UTC

Oh, good, a cure!

This has been excellent, and I love how you depict their relationship and also all the extra worldbuilding details.