Rules for Dating: Avengers Poly Style

Nov 21, 2013 13:38


Title: Rules for Dating:  Avengers Poly Style
Author: mage_girl
Artist: N/A
Fandom:  Avengers
Characters:  Bruce Banner/Tony Stark/Steve Rogers; Clint Barton/Natasha Romanov/Phil Coulson, Pepper, JARVIS
Word Count: A hair under 30K
Rating: Mature
Contents Warning:  Sexual Content
Summary:  There are rules to dating poly style. Tony doesn't know them but he's eager ( Read more... )

round 5, submission

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kinkthatwinked November 25 2013, 01:50:23 UTC
I enjoyed this very much. It was a great idea to have two poly groups here: one established and experienced, setting an excellent example and offering great advice; and one still at square one, bashful yet excited, careful yet stumbling, trying to figure out how to do this. It was a great juxtaposition.

The journal entries were used well here, an interesting way to get into characters' heads. I also liked the poly rules beginning each chapter, and how Tony basically bent or broke every one of them. :)

I kind of like how the only one in a "traditional" relationship is Thor (if you can call human woman/Norse god a traditional pairing), and yet he is completely on board with his teammates' choices.

I especially liked how the sex didn't happen until the very end, and all we got up till then was all the talking that's supposed to go into a poly relationship. I liked how even the epilogue showed that they still have a ways to go physically. Even when things are looking great, it should still be a work in progress.

Nice job.

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mage_girl November 27 2013, 17:56:25 UTC
Thank you so much for your thoughtful commentary and praise! I was so thrilled to read everything ( ... )

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