Material Witness-Serious About the Pony (2 x 01, Deep in Death): A Series of Linked Castle One-Shots

[pollylynn]

Title: Material Witness-Serious About the Pony [Set during Deep in Death, 2 x 01]

Summary: "He's angry when the idea strikes him. When he remembers, and it suddenly seems like the perfect thing. Yes, he wants to make it up to her. Whatever she thinks there is to make up, however he can make it up, then fine, he'll do that. But he wouldn't mind

Comments

[bamboo_angel]

This is great, you capture Castle's voice beautifully, his fascination and bewilderment, that the more he studies her the less he understands.

[pollylynn]

Aww, thank you! That's so nice to hear. I worry sometimes that my internal Castle is just my internal me. Maybe I'm just Castle's spirit pony.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving feedback!

[kehwie]

I love the rambly, stream-of-consciousness nature of this. It sounds like the kind of dialogue Castle would really have with himself.

[pollylynn]

Thanks. It's always tremendously reassuring when that works for readers. I'm always worried that the inside of Castle's head is really nothing more than the inside of my head.

[limonatafic]

Hee, I was reading this and as I stretched my neck, my gaze scooted around and He has to change her mind and it starts with showing her came across as He has to change her mind and start showering with her. So I guess you know where my mind is...