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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Aug 04, 2007 22:30

Eightieth part of a work in progress
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish, maybe (?)
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an extremely contrary muse that refuses to shut up and leave ( Read more... )

i shall do what i must . . ., fear leads to anger., . . . let go . . ., fear is the path to the dark side., search your feelings!, let go of everything you fear to lose, anger leads to hate., do or do not. there is no try., . . . not this crude matter., i have a really bad feeling about this., we are encouraged to love., this is a dangerous time . . ., ...in the wrong place at the wrong time, try not. do or do not. there is no try., . . . i love you . . . i know., be mindful of your thoughts . . ., . . . luminous beings are we . . ., trust me!, anger fear aggression...the dark side..., always two there are . . ., i must not fear. fear is the mind-killer, hate leads to suffering., kenobi & skywalker - anakin & obi-wan, the force is . . . an energy field . . ., . . . i sense something . . ., something terrible has happened, help me . . . you're my only hope, don't underestimate the force., don't be afraid., i find your lack of faith disturbing...

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spartan_117 August 5 2007, 12:02:08 UTC

Oooooh I'm not sure I want to know how this turns out but your description of her arm had me cringing. I'm with Bail on this one. I don't know if I could look at her and his relief at Anakin and Obi-Wan blocking his view is very understandable

polgarawolf August 6 2007, 08:32:21 UTC

*Waves a semi-tired hello* Yes, poor Keiana, I hate to say it like this, but that injury really should have killed her outright and if the boys hadn't been able to get there as quickly as they didn't I'd accuse Sabé of being cruel for keeping her alive in such a state. Being caught in the blast-radius of a thermal detonator is most assuredly NOT a recipe for minor flesh wounds. If you makes you feel any better, I hesitated over describing how bad the injuries to the arm looked, but then when it occurred to me that they were going to literally have to rebuild the whole darn thing from the bones on up to the skin I decide I had to have something that made it clear just how completely destroyed the entire limb basically was. (Bail's been in battle situations before and even he feels a bit queasy, which I think probably says more about how bad the wounds really are than my rather short description of what it looks like ( ... )