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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Oct 17, 2006 03:00

Fifty-seventh part of a work in progress
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish (?)
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an extremely contrary muse that refuses to shut up and leave me ( Read more... )

i have a very bad feeling about this., patience - use the force - think!, we have a new enemy., be mindful of your thoughts . . ., fear of loss is a path to the dark side., let go of everything you fear to lose, do or do not. there is no try., i sense a disturbance in the force, a presence i've not felt since . . ., . . . i sense something . . ., you can't stop the change., don't be afraid., you want this . . . don't you?

Comments 19

spartan_117 October 19 2006, 11:53:58 UTC

Um...hi *waves* I'm new to the whole Obi/Ani thing and I stumbled on your brilliant story looking for fan fics.

I know more about RotS than I ever did until now and I love the relationship you've built painstakingly throughout this whole story but mostly I love the dynamics betwen Obi and Ani themselves and the bond they now share through their love and their conncetion to the Force.

*sighs happily*

polgarawolf October 19 2006, 17:01:38 UTC

*Waves happily back* I'm so glad you like the story! Thanks for telling me so! Having somebody comment always makes the day brighter. And reassures me that the relationship I've been building between them makes sense to others besides just me. *Grins and bounces happily* You should be glad to know that even though this particular story is finally getting near its end, I've got sequels planned and should be writing in this particular SW AU 'verse for quite some time! And I hope to get more of the next chapter written and up this weekend . . . *Hums happily and goes back to looking through notes for next chapter*

spartan_117 October 19 2006, 23:32:57 UTC

Oooh more? *waits patiently*

I forgot to mention that I love the whole notion of Obi Wan being a virgin and what Ani teaches him about his own body and the pleasure it can bring Obi Wan....*sighs*

polgarawolf October 20 2006, 05:38:19 UTC

Oh, there will be more. For a while more, yet, there will be more. And then there will be more stories after this one, too. I just have to get things typed and then on the lj, is all! It's mostly lack of time (because of work) that keeps me from getting things up more quickly. *Sighs ( ... )

Thread 17

anonymous November 27 2006, 04:58:32 UTC

polgara, don't forget this one. we are still waiting for more......

polgarawolf November 27 2006, 08:12:51 UTC

Oh, I haven't! I promise! I just got talked into participating in NaNo and used that as an excuse to backtrack to the time-period of the Outbound Flight Project so I could get what otherwise would have been a ridiculously long prologue for the sequel to this WiP written and out of the way. (I thought I'd be able to work on them both at the same time and I did, a little, but not as much as I'd hoped to because my computer went on the fritz and I was without computer access for most of a week.) And that may sound confusing, but I promise it will make sense when I get to this WiP's sequel. Which will happen right after I finish this WiP, which I promise I will do. It's just going to take a bit longer than I'd thought/hoped it would, unfortunately . . .