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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Jan 28, 2006 03:00

Thirty-fourth part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Fairly PG-13ish now, but inevitably at least an R (?)
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an extremely contrary muse that refuses to shut up and leave me ( Read more... )

how could it have come to this?, . . . let go . . ., don't blame me!, let go of everything you fear to lose, i have a very bad feeling about this, your thoughts betray you . . ., how is that possible?, you want this . . . don't you?, we are encouraged to love, be mindful of your thoughts . . ., . . . luminous beings are we . . ., trust me!, i love you . . . i know, he is the chosen one., i must not fear. fear is the mind-killer, oh not good!, i sense a disturbance in the force, . . . i sense something . . ., don't underestimate the force., search your feelings, it's not my fault!

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pureevil230 February 26 2006, 16:56:38 UTC

wow very touching.

polgarawolf March 3 2006, 03:30:30 UTC

Thank you so much! I know it kind of ends in the middle of things, but unfortunately lately I've been so pressed for time - and I have such a bad habit of going back and editing in new material in previous chapters, instead of just writing from where I've gotten to, here, on - that I just haven't gotten the end of this scene written yet. I'm hoping to have more up, within the next few weeks. I hope you'll come back and read more, when it's finished, later on!

Woops, here's some more! anonymous March 5 2006, 00:58:07 UTC

I kind of had to get to this bit in a roundabout way, but I'm very glad I did! Still hoping for more. :)

Cheers,
Princess S.

Re: Woops, here's some more! polgarawolf March 9 2006, 17:03:10 UTC

My chapters are kind of haphazard right now. New material in earlier sections got edited in last weekend and it kind of screwed some things up. Sorry if this part was hard to get to! I'm still hoping to get more up, this weekend. Maybe even to get this chapter finished, finally!

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polgarawolf March 20 2006, 14:28:06 UTC

*Laughs* Well, Obi-Wan is my favorite. I've been obsessed primarily with him (and the not really fully explained story of what happened between him and Anakin/Vader) ever since I first saw the original trio of movies, when I was little. (And yes, I know this makes me kind of weird. Oh, well!) Anakin is important mostly because he means so much to Obi-Wan, not because he's the be-all and end-all of Force-users or anything else. Anakin is the Sith'ari, but I've made Obi-Wan the Chosen One here, so he's the one at the heart of this story and the focal point around which all of the ohter main characters move. Everybody focuses on Obi-Wan - some more than others - and while I wouldn't quite go so far as to say he makes people gay (sorry - that makes me want to laugh. It's because of a story I read on the Ewan/Hayden community a while back), he certainly seems to, ah, attract the attention of quite a lot of people. *Laughs* Besides which, IMHO, Anakin circa RotS may be quite pretty, in a nicely muscled pouty-boy kind of way, but Obi-Wan has ( ... )