Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Nov 08, 2005 00:30

Thirty-first part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Fairly PG-13ish now, but inevitably at least an R (?)
Disclaimer: Same as always!
Summary: Ditto!
*Author’s Note: 1) Please see most previous author's notes/warnings.
2) My description of the Council Chamber is ( Read more... )

. . . let go . . ., i sense something . . ., . . . delusions of grandeur . . ., luminous beings are we . . ., you want this . . . don't you?, i have a very bad feeling about this., we are encouraged to love, be mindful of your thoughts . . ., trust me!, always two there are . . ., he is the chosen one., i must not fear. fear is the mind-killer, i felt a great disturbance in the force, don't underestimate the force., search your feelings, the circle is now complete.

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avari_maethor December 3 2005, 16:49:09 UTC
Their gonna make Bail their Padawan?! AWESOME! But do I sense a hint of jealousy in Anakin?

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polgarawolf December 5 2005, 20:06:13 UTC
It takes Anakin a while to realize just how deeply Bail cares for Obi-Wan. (Obi-Wan's not the only one who's good at not noticing things he doesn't know how to deal with.) It's one of those complications I mentioned earlier . . .

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polgarawolf December 10 2005, 19:28:29 UTC
*Blushes* I'm so glad you like it! I'm woefully behind due to a mixup about the date of the family christmas party. I'm hoping to get more typed up this coming week. I know it kind of just stops midscene, but I've not been able to be at the computer for more than twenty minutes at a time so far this week.

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kath_mandu December 22 2005, 22:01:57 UTC
Words cannot describe how much I love this 'fic! I know it's a WIP, but it is so fantastically well-written it boggles the mind. The relationship between Obi and Ani is one of the best portrayals I've ever encountered in fanfic, and I await breathlessly the next fantastic installment of YBtM. Though I am kinda worried about the Obi/Bail vibe I'm starting to get, or maybe even a Obi/Bail/Ani threesome vibe. Oh well. No matter what happens, I'm sure you'll handle it with the aplomb that you've handled everything else, and who knows, maybe it'll grow on me. ;)

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polgarawolf December 25 2005, 11:47:54 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm hoping to get more written now that the holidays are pretty much over. Don't worry too much, by the way. Bail truly does adore Obi-Wan and he's goint to be fairly important down the road a ways, but it's definitely not going to be a threesome in the way you're fearing. I really can't say much more without giving things away, but let's just say that Bail is very strong in the Force . . .

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Desperate Plea anonymous March 5 2006, 00:50:08 UTC
So fantastic! Please, oh please, post any more that you may have (I have favorited you, and shall return)! I have this achy thing in my chest that won't go away until Anakin and Obi-Wan are consumated. *blushes* I know...that sounds horrid. But now that the lovely new Jedi Order is born, I even so still itch for more romance. Yeesh, I'm a hopeless!

Sincerely,
Princess S.

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Re: Desperate Plea polgarawolf March 9 2006, 16:58:34 UTC
I'm sorry I'm being so slow! RL is a major pain and is limiting all my efforts to get more written. I've got lots of notes and plans for the rest of the fic, including the consummation, which should be happening soon after this part! The boys are going to wait for the upheaval in the Senate and etc. to settle down enough to be sure that things won't simply fall apart if/when they leave Coruscant to go after Grievous, so they're going to have at least an entire day alone, I think, and believe me, they are going to make the best of their time together while they can! I'm hoping to get as much as I can written this weekend so that the fic will at least be done up until that point. That way, I can devote all of next weekend to the writing of their day together, if I don't get it all done this weekend.

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