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[Fanfiction] Rain

Sep 01, 2010 23:06

Title: Rain
Author: polari-s
Pairing: Yesung/Reader
Raiting: NC17
Genre: romance, smut
Summary: The movie was boring, you two had finished with the ice cream and all that you could do was to go to the rooftop.

( Your eyes were glued in the screen of the TV while watching a comedy movie, but you weren't paying attention at it, specially with the sound of the rain outside making you want to sleep, so you couldn't understand a word of the movie anymore. )

!fic, !reader fic, @yesung, !genre: smut

Comments 21

kstaaa September 2 2010, 04:29:36 UTC

this is so hot yet so cute and made my insides get all bubbly :')

polari_s September 2 2010, 18:00:58 UTC

thank you ^_^ i'm happy for this ^^

kunin13 September 2 2010, 06:34:08 UTC

awwwwwwwww >.<

i like the ENDING, She(I) felt the cold, then she(I) curled herself(myself) in Yesung's chest while he took the blanket to cover them(us)

<3333333333333333333

polari_s September 2 2010, 18:02:00 UTC

it would be an awesome scene, wouldn't it? ;A;

thank you for commenting ^^

lulufeca September 2 2010, 14:43:02 UTC

preciso comentar em portugues!

realmente acho que smut escrito por brasileiras é mais facil de acreditar, nao é tao utopico e ficou mto bom. por mais que eu ache que falte um pouco de preliminares, mais toques e beijos e coisa e tal.

mas cara... yesung e chuva. mto perfeito, demais. ammei. vou botar nos memories (se eu achar o botaozinho...)

polari_s September 2 2010, 18:03:28 UTC

brigada brigada~~
idk, mas ainda seria uma noite perfeita né? ;A;

mas valeu~ ^^

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polari_s September 3 2010, 23:58:36 UTC

thank you thank you ^^
ice cream <3

suju_luver December 11 2010, 07:06:37 UTC

Yesung/reader fics are the best!! I think I just died this was so good. Thanks for writing this ^_^

polari_s December 11 2010, 10:30:42 UTC

yay~ thanks for commenting ^^
i'm glad that you liked~