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[pokemonsues1]

TITLE: Hearts of the Night
PERPETRATOR: Waveripple of Team Sunrise
SUE-O-METER: (bad)

FULL NAMES: Misty Waterflower, May Maple and Dawn Hikari.
SPECIES: Human.
HAIR: as per canon.
EYES: as per canon.
MARKINGS:
POSSESSIONS: An invitation to to Lilycove academy. "Dawn was wearing a dark blue-black long-sleeved shirt and white and light pink skort,

Comments

[glaciachan]

Ah, yes, nothing like a little bad canon-sue fic to kick of the evening. Also, really good question, where ARE the pokémon in this fic? Not even a mention of Dawn's Plipup in here. I'm also kind of confused about what POV this is written from.

Also, erasing a hole in the paper "in argue?" so she was arguing with paper? xD

[yemi_hikari]

To me, if a Pokemon or Digimon fanfic has no Pokemon, it is really hard to place the work as a fanfic for those particular fandoms. I actually tried scanning reviews of chapters, to see if the author added Pokemon in. No luck. I have to agree with one of the reviewers then, who reviewed for the first chapter. OoC+AU+no~Pokemon=original~work~desquised~as~fanfiction.

[artemis_j_halk]

"someone stink bombed the house, only the bomb had super dangerous, linger chemical gases, that make her house uninhabitable"
That is not a stink bomb, then.
Not to mention the fact that the local governments would evacuate the people who lived nearby, destroy the houses and wait until the area was inhabitable again.

[sandstorm]

Wha--You do math in Pokemon school?

[artemis_j_halk]

My thought would be so that they know how to count their Pokemon.
Beyond that seems stupid. Like learning how to count past eight in band.

[yemi_hikari]

I think it goes back to the fact that they are writing original fiction, desquised as fanfiction.

[yemi_hikari]

P.S. - I am kind of wondering where Pokemonsues1 is. I feel that she's done a good job, and have respect for her like I do Pottersues. Truth be told, Pokemon is likely not an easy fandom to spork. Hope you come back soon, and good health to you.