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Apr 24, 2010 13:35


TITLE: Pokemon Princess MayXDrew story

PERPETRATOR: sa01ll

SUE-O-METER:  (Bad)

FULL NAME: Maylin Maple
SPECIES: Human/Princess
HAIR: Brown

EYES: Blue. I think.
MARKINGS:  None described

POSSESSIONS: “I was in the most beautiful gown I could ever think of. It was probably touching the floor. I had long sparking princess gloves and a ( Read more... )

princess, time-travel, blue eyes, may-sue

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artemis_j_halk April 24 2010, 19:22:18 UTC
To live teenagerhood
First sentence fail.

Actually, that's not even the first sentence. Automatic fail, right there.

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turtle_yurippe April 25 2010, 02:30:32 UTC
What's with the random Japanese? Her "step-mom" has a "Japanese name", same as her school, but they all have English ones?

It was probably touching the floor.
Just look down. It's really easy, you know.

Where is Drew?
I have to say I read (and wrote) a lot of Contestshipping, but this is one of the... well, less developed stories I've seen.

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pokemonsues1 April 25 2010, 04:39:00 UTC
Drew appears in Chapter 3 I believe.

I really do love Contestshipping, but this is just...meh.

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