Fic: Fade to Black: Epilogue.

[pokeitlikejello]

Title: Fade to Black
Disclaimer: All rights belong to Fox and David Shore. I make no money from this.
Summary: Part of the hospital collapses, trapping House and Cuddy beneath the rubble. After extraction, there's going to be recovery.
Author's Note: Since some people felt like this wasn't finished (and I was kind of was weary on the last chapter

Comments

[savedbyfaith]

Oh, you ended it with a kiss. Ha. People are going to freak.

Personally, I was comfortable with your prior chapter being the end; I saw that things were going to go back to normal - at least as normal as it would get. But I like the closure that this brings to the story!

[pokeitlikejello]

Oh, you ended it with a kiss. Ha. People are going to freak.

Haha. I KNOW. I almost wanted to take it out. But, no, I left it in. Heh.

And thank you!! I was okay with the last chapter being the end and I had my reasons for it, even if I felt a bit at odds with it, but then with a lot of people not thinking it was an end, I just decided to do the epilogue. Thanks so much!!

[lucyvanflick]

Nice epilogue. And yes, I was also ok with the last chapter you posted but you're right that other people might have felt they were left hanging.

Just a few errors I spotted, if you don't mind:

1) She used the cane on her left the side,
- I guess you mean "her left side".

2) She as much of a bitch as Lorrainey was?”
- I don't know if adding the "y" in the name was deliberate. This is more of a clarification than a correction.

3) He gave a shrug and then added, “sometimes.”
- I think the "sometimes" should be done in sentence case.

Real closure finally! Yay!

[pokeitlikejello]

Thank you!! And yeah, I was pretty okay with the last chapter being it, but I decided to add the epilogue for the readers. I figured everyone else who had no problem with the ending wouldn't mind. ;o)

1) Fixed. Thank you!!

2) It's suppose to be that way. House is just playing with her name.

3) And do you mean, like, make it a sentence? 'Cause I'll change it to a capital 's' and everything now and hopefully that's what you meant. Those type of things confuse me when adding dialogue to the end of a sentence.

Thanks so much for your insight and help!! :oD

[kateinslacks]

Okay, this was awesome, but the part that really just kind of sealed the deal for me was the end: Romeo and Juliet reference (which you know I died with love) followed by "House, go pee in a cup" (I LOLed - hell of a juxtaposition with the greatest love story of all time and urine) to the kiss and I AM IN LOVE. This whole fic was amazing, and it totally could have stood with the last chapter being the end, but I am so, so glad you continued it to this, because this was just like...giftwrap. Perfect. Thank you so much, love. :)

[pokeitlikejello]

Thankies, hun. Yeah, I just wanted to get your opinion first before posting if you had time, but it was totally fine. And yeah, I am a sucker for Shakespeare. Hahaha.

I like referring to it as giftwrap. Nice term. Heh. And I've grown a little bit more to liking the epilogue instead of the last chapter being the end.

Thank you, wifey!

[pokeitlikejello]

Thank you very much! I felt like this did finish it up a little better. And yeah, the last scene is my favorite!! :oD