A fanfic from a newbie...

[devildelivery]

Title: A Reason to Leave
Author: devildelivery
Fandom: Pokemon between Gen I, III and II, IV
Characters/Pairings: Red, Pikachu, Blastoise, Snorlax, Lapras, Charizard, Professor Oak, random trainers
Summary: Maybe, just maybe, his reason to go to Mt. Silver wasn’t as complicated as everyone thought it would be.
Rating: G
Warnings: This is stupid, I’ll

Comments

[lark]

/cracking up

There are certainly rough spots in your story, and you could probably brush up on your grammar/spelling/word choice a little (if you want me to point out specific areas let me know?), but overall this was really funny and cute! I like your sense of humor; you have a good sense of comedic timing. Poor Red, ahah! My favorite moment was when he was hiding in Professor Oak's lab and waving furiously for Oak to be quiet. XD

This is a nice first fic and I'm glad you've joined the fandom! I hope you have a great time here. :D

[devildelivery]

if you want me to point out specific areas let me know? --> Please! I guess that is what I've been lacking. Most of the times I just use/put words that I like. As long as it gets my story done, that it.

Glad that you find this fic funny! So my attempt wasn't in vain, huh? :)

[chrysa]

lol this is... hilarious.

this is definitely more on the side of things you would have to hold up a certain level of suspension of belief for, but once you do, it's really funny.

[devildelivery]

I'm glad you like it! XD