Coma Boy

[kmmerc]

TItle: Coma Boy
Author: kmmerc
Pairing: FInch/Reese

Rated R for references to violence/child abuse!
Was posted on tumblr with a different title - a response to a request for prompts!

Comments

aww

[raindancingdog]

I'm glad you posted this here. I am sure Finchs' childhood was awful.

Re: aww

[kmmerc]

thanks!

[farmgirl1964]

This was really great! You do such a good job with POI!! I do have to make one comment on content: Finch is in his late 50's. He would not have had a brother that was older and in that war. Not if he couldn't even drive at the age he was portrayed. Other than that, super job!!

And, feel free to correct me if I'm wrong. I only read it once before commenting.

[kmmerc]

I know! sigh - went and fixed it! LOL - maybe it was like that because he is an unreliable character, post-coma and all - maybe mixing it up with John, in a way. but fixed. Thanks! BTW, I know Memerson is nearing 60 but according to the statue of 'the Founder', Ingram, who I supposed was a classmate and therefore about the same general ages as Finch, would have just been 50 years old.

[farmgirl1964]

Yes, Nathan and Harold were classmates. It doesn't 'officially' say that Harold was younger due to graduating early or anything either. Hmmmm....I just know that I had graduated college by 1990, was working on a graduate degree, after a year and a half hiatus, and am now in my late 40's, so the math wasn't quite right. But yeah, 'Danny' could've been unreliable, too. Anyway it was awesome work by an incredible author(ess) and I'm glad you took my "criticism" properly, as I meant it, I mean. Some authors totally "wig" if you say anything even neutral!

Thanks again!

[whomii2]

Enjoyed this very much (even if I did misread the title as "Comma boy")

[kmmerc]

LOL - me, too!

[bluefinch]

Am I going insane? I could have sworn I left you a comment. I loved this.