Fic: Damaged - Part 30

Aug 30, 2012 23:43

Title: Damaged - Part 30
Author: Katica Locke
Pairing/Characters: Reese/Finch, Carter, Fusco, Dr. Tillman
Rating: NC-17
Summary: What happens when Reese can't be in two places at once?
Warnings: Slash, possible spoilers for all episodes, WIP
Word Count: 3000 words
Damaged - Part 1 - Part 2 - Part 3 - Part 4 - Part 5 - Part 6 - Part 7 - Part 8 - Part 9
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character: detective joss carter, character: detective lionel fusco, category: drama, category: romance, character: john reese, category: angst, category: slash, author: katicalocke, character: dr. tillman, category: wip, category: hurt/comfort, rating: nc-17, pairing: finch/reese, fanworks: fanfic, character: harold finch

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hpcool2003 August 31 2012, 07:47:26 UTC
Dr. Tilman's back! Ohhh, I would love to have her back in Season 2...
LOL at Finch on pain killers, it's episode 17 all over again.

Don't be mad Reese, they're just looking out for you! Snow will forever be Kirkland now right? Since The Machine reformatted him, ha, that's so funny.

Thanks for the quick update! I can see some comfort coming in the near future... right? :p

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 22:02:54 UTC
Me, too. I think she's my favorite POI.
Finch with compromised inhibitions is great under any circumstances, lol.

In the next chapter, we'll find out just how far the Machine went to reformat him, lol.

Thanks for reading! Yes, the comfort is coming. After the physical injuries heal and we deal with one more crisis, then there will be several chapters of comfort and lovin'. XD

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hpcool2003 August 31 2012, 23:42:17 UTC
Yeah, Dr.Tilman is one of my favorites too. Please bring her back Q_Q.
Haha, I think we can all agree that Finch under the influence of anything is great XD

*Gasp* one more crisis? ohhh, you evil woman! XD
Thanks for writing!!! If it weren't for your wonderful stories, there wouldn't be any 'reading'!

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katicalocke September 1 2012, 06:15:32 UTC
I would love to see her come back on the show.
Absolutely. ^_^

I know, I just can't stop torturing them. Not literally, though. No more torture in this story, lol.

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mamahub August 31 2012, 11:39:25 UTC
Dawww! Reese's frantic search for Harold, and then the kiss in the hospital bed! And Fusco and Carter's reaction to it was so cute.

Hooray for Dr. Tillman and Harold convincing John to let her treat him! His boo-boos need fixing too.

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 22:07:06 UTC
Yes, I had to have at least one big, romantic kiss. :)

Yeah, I'm not sure if there's anything she can do for him, other than give him antibiotics to prevent infection, but that knee is going to need a few stitches, at least.

Thanks for reading! ^_^

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kmmerc August 31 2012, 12:09:29 UTC
Dang, does it meant that I am obsessed with this story when I am actively worrying about the electrical burns to John's perineum? (and sack)?????????????

I loves me some Dr. Tillman, though I think she should have been a little happier to see them.LOL

The hospital kiss in front of Carter and poor Fusco - a giant basket full of sighs!

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 22:21:40 UTC
I think obsession is a bit of an understatement, lol.

I think she's my favorite POI -- the one I'd most like to see again, at least. I think she was just surprised to see them.

Reese was so relieved to find him, he forgot where they were. :)

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kmmerc August 31 2012, 22:45:39 UTC
Poor John's poor ouchies! LOL So what is more serious than obsessed? I am not planning on stalking you, dang it!(snort)

Have they ever re-run Cura Te Ipsum? I only saw it once. I remember laughing when Reese opened up the closet full of LYE!!
So many packages, so clearly labelled!

Finch is so cute when he's stoned. I have a rampant plot bunny where Dr. Tillman, who suggested that Finch try alternative therapies, gives him a script for medical marijuana. Finch tries to convince John to join him or at least baby sit him the first time he tries it!

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 23:45:42 UTC
Fanatical? Infatuated? Possessed? You wouldn't be my first stalker, lol. I actually had someone ask me for a lock of my hair once. 0_o

I think they did run it once more after the original airing. I love that episode. So full of feels.

Squee! Stoned Finch! I hope you do write that, it would be SO funny and cute! (Of course, you've got a lot on your plate already, lol!)

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aprilvalentine August 31 2012, 12:49:20 UTC
Wonderful -- you made my morning. And I understand about having to go back to work and getting busier, but I might go through withdrawal if a chapter is late. No pressure. lol

I love John trying to pretend he's not hurt and stalking around the hospital to find Harold. And Harold drugged up, nearly mentioning the Machine! And of course, that's where the papers came from.

Oh, and your continuity error? Is it this: Snow telling Harold in the previous chapter:
"That phone I took from you has some nifty apps on it. I especially like the one that tracked Reese's cell. Did that come standardHarold threw his phone under the car so they couldn't use it to find Reese when Snow captured him. So Mark couldn't use it for the apps to track them to the restaurant ( ... )

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mamahub August 31 2012, 15:09:25 UTC
Good catch on the continuity error April! I honestly didn't have to research it but I was wracking my brain on the drive to work this morning trying to figure out what I missed. But I agree with you and Katica - no big deal. Mark F-ing Snow is such a wily bastard that he would have had some way of finding them anyway.

"I think he (Reese) gets angry when others try to look after him because, to him, that means he can't look after himself." -- I agree. Also I think he gets angry about it because he's feeling vulnerable and his instinct is to protect OTHERS and deflect notice away from himself at all times. It was interesting in this chapter that he himself noticed and was worried when Carter and Tillman were not convinced by his attempts at pretending everything is fine and dandy. He is feeling out of control, unbalanced, and doesn't know how to deal with that. MY POOR BABY!! Let me (and Harold) hug you.

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kmmerc August 31 2012, 22:41:06 UTC
I was totally going to re-read all the chapters but had to go to work, to find the error. What was I saying about being obsessed??

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 23:01:11 UTC
Ack! Don't re-read it! Lol, well, you can if you want to, but I'm sure it's just full of plot-holes. I started writing it back in February, before the season ended, and it's taken me so long to write it, I'm sure there's a ton of stuff that I've forgotten. Like that Finch called Dr. Tillman for advice about the drugs that Snow gave Reese. I completely forgot that happened, lol, until I went back to check if the cell phone error was right.

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managerie August 31 2012, 15:04:11 UTC
***Jumps around like a muppet on E ***

YAY!!!!!!!!!

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katicalocke August 31 2012, 23:25:32 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it! ^_^

***Enjoys the mental image of a muppet on E***

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