did you noe a dork is a whales penis?!

[poetry_pimp]

well...music man is really gunna be bad. i mean its aiight but like its not the best. cast B is like WAYYYYYY better than us (cast A). kinda sux...the rehearsals are tiring but are sometimes fun!! especially at breaks! 2morrow i might go see harry potter with jessica t, zaria, rachel, and maybe some other peoples! well if you wanna come your

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[blewitall]

cute...
very cute
yum. dork i love you

[acrosmyuniverse]

iv actually been hearing cast A is better.

[rock_on_drumer]

pretty nifty..haha
ill ttyl

[mnlvwafaggy]

honestly..... i didnt like it, you tried to rhyme but ended it too soon. you dont put enough emotion in all of it. youtthink about ittoo too much. tal you have to stop putting up poerty untill yo uknow that it is commlete and its what you want it to sound like. there is more then one draft in wrtting a poem. truthfully it was really not good. try again but dont make it all the same. all your poems are about death love and depression. i dont like them. poems are not always sad. your friends are telling you a lie, im honestly oin to tell the truth im sorry if it hurt you. im just criticizing, you wanted to know and i want to tell you.

tamigreenmachine

[poetry_pimp]

ok. its kool. you just told me your opinion and i respect that but i have a reply. i dont get why i cant put my poems on my lj i dont care wut people think and maybe all my poems need a little work but im getting there. i write poetry of how i feel, thats how i get my anger out and sadness so basicly all my poems are going to be depressing. but people have different opinions so how do you noe my friends are lying to me? if they didnt like them they tell me. but ill keep your opinion and stuff that you said to me in mind. thnx

[strwbrries_wld7]

its great

lol
~heather

[anonymous]

tal i miss youuuuu! we HAVE to do something soon! i luv you~
-melly

[poetry_pimp]

i noe i miss you so uch mellster! cal me sometime! or ill call u!