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deliuzzo August 5 2013, 14:03:27 UTC
Although in this chapter are missed interactions between Ollie and Chloe was really very interesting.
I suppose also need to be able to finally start a different relationship from friendship between them.

I'll give you my compliments, write really well!

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poetgirl925 August 6 2013, 00:44:36 UTC
Not to worry, it's mostly Chlollie interactions from here on out. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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malugargula August 5 2013, 19:44:59 UTC
Great chapter
I really liked the Chlark talk, they needed it to correct their friendship
And I'm glad Lois is ok with Ollie's feelings, so that she won't stand in the way of Chlollie :)

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poetgirl925 August 6 2013, 00:46:32 UTC
I'm glad you liked it because it was kind of important to me that I deal with Clark and Lois before getting them together. And I'm glad that you're enjoying the story because I've loved writing this one. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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chlollifan84 August 6 2013, 09:16:18 UTC
Great chapter! I'm so happy to see an update here.
Chloe and Ollie have fixed things out with Clark and Lois, it's a good thing, now they can take their relationship to the next level without hurting anyone.
I can't wait to read more.

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poetgirl925 August 8 2013, 16:56:01 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! It was important to me that the Chlark relationship be straightened out before Chloe and Oliver moved on - likewise, I wanted to get the whole previous Oliver/Lois stuff out of the way. Now Chloe and Oliver can begin dealing with their own issues - and they have a few of those. Thanks for reading and commenting! I'll post more soon :)

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dreammaker101 August 6 2013, 13:41:55 UTC
Great chapter. Glad you have not given up on this story :) Really liked the Clark and Chloe, and Lois and Oliver friendships, and their honest conversations with each other. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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poetgirl925 August 8 2013, 16:58:43 UTC
Don't worry, I won't give up on it. I just don't always have the time I need to sit down and hash out the details, and this has been a harder story to write because it's so big. Anyway, glad you liked how I chose to deal with Clark and Chloe, and Lois and Oliver - I wanted to get it out of the way before Chloe and Oliver move on to their own issues. Thanks for commenting! More soon :)

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madlenita August 6 2013, 17:00:40 UTC
Thanks for new chapter, as i was saying, reading this one more time make me mood i little better...

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poetgirl925 August 8 2013, 16:59:39 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad I can help improve your mood with my stories. I'll get more up soon. Thanks for commenting :)

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