Thank god that Ollie finally got his act together....I felt so bad for Chloe when she broke things off with him. The grand gesture was perfect and I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to them openly dating! Excellent job!!
Thanks! It's always nice to finish a story especially if readers have enjoyed the journey. And the epilogue should be up next week because my weekend is Thu-Fri and for once, I don't have plans. I'm trying to expand a few scenes before impost. Thanks for reading and commenting!
I'm glad you enjoyed the way I brought them back together. And there is a possibility of a sequel but I'm still in the outlining stage. First I plan to get back to Letting Go, Shadows, and the Baby Queen series, so we'll see how the sequel shapes up. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Great update and progression to being "Official" . As for the coming out....to often Ollie gets the rough treatment so it would be nice if someone in the family gave him the benefit of the doubt...only if it fits in with your story though!
I'm glad you liked the progression. This story was difficult to write at times to be honest. And I think I already have a scene that fits your request - hopefully everyone will enjoy the epilogue I've planned. I should have it up next week barring Internet issues. Thanks for your comments!
Quick thank you for that last part, i love how Oliver did that "grand gesture" ;-) And: i write this while reading "Oh, Thanksgiving with Gabe, and Uncle Sam;-), and with Lois knowing that Chloe and Oliver are a couple, what a idea...." I am waiting for epilog and Sam and Gabe reaction ;-) So can i ask what you will upload next? I really waiting for Letting go and Shadow ;-)
Haha yeah - honestly I was really tempted to write a Thanksgiving visit that outed them lol. But it didn't fit with my overall idea of the story, and I really needed Oliver to step up and be the one to go public since he was the one holding back. Next should be the epilogue followed by either Letting Go or Baby Queen. I swear I'm getting back to those! And Shadows of course. Thanks for your comments!
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It was time for Oliver!, lol Any chance of a sequel?
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And: i write this while reading
"Oh, Thanksgiving with Gabe, and Uncle Sam;-), and with Lois knowing that Chloe and Oliver are a couple, what a idea...."
I am waiting for epilog and Sam and Gabe reaction ;-)
So can i ask what you will upload next? I really waiting for Letting go and Shadow ;-)
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