Author: Poetgirl925
Title: Shadows
Rating: R, based on later chapters
Summary: When Chloe disappears from Metropolis, Oliver pulls himself from his downward spiral in Star City and returns to Metropolis to find out what happened to her. The Justice League reunites and with allies old and new, their search leads to a secret government agency and
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This is a big cast of characters to wrangle together, so I'm glad that you liked how I included everyone. And I like playing with parallel moments in stories - hence the one here between Oliver and Chloe. Oliver is feeling a little confused about his feelings at the moment - coupled with his worry about Chloe, it's taking an emotional toll on him. I think a lot of people's questions about Chloe will be answered in the next update, so I'm going to try to get it up soonish. I've been down with the flu for the last several days, but I'll get to editing again by Thursday (my weekend.) Thanks for your comments! :)
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And poor Chloe i was hoping that those two weeks would be not so scary for her....
And Ollie really wanted kissed Chloe ... And is going take another chance with Chloe...
And cold... Well this is my first September in years when i am not ill, usually 1 September comes and i have cold, feaver, and all that...
So get better... (sorry for english)...
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My cold turned out to be the flu (ugh) so I've been in bed sleeping for a couple of days now. I think I'm feeling better though, so back to work tomorrow. And don't worry - your English is awesome :)
Thanks a lot for your comments!
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Thank you, first of all for taking the time to update. With your busy schedule and not feeling well I truly appreciate your efforts.
Now OMG you brought everyone to town. The General, Martha, Lucy and now Batman is going to make an appearance. Oh and I dig that you brought in Courtney and who I think is Carter? lol
You are awesome!!!
Loved the bit with Chloe and showing her vulnerable side all alone in the dark. She will prevail I have no doubt.
I am so glad Ollie talked about his feelings for Chloe. I hope he stays true to his word and does let Chloe know how he feels when they fnd her.
Awesome update.
Happy writing.
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This is a big cast of characters for sure - I worried that it was too ambitious, but it made sense to have them all there if Chloe was abducted. I mean, who ignores their family in a situation like that? And Martha is family too. :) You will see more of Courtney and Carter later, too.
Chloe has had an upsetting couple of weeks - I can picture her letting down her guard in that way while alone in the dark. As for Oliver, he's feeling a lot of confusing things right now, but it definitely comes up when he finds Chloe. ;-)
This should have been two chapters, but I gave you guys an extra-long one to make up for the lack of updating. I'll try not to take too long with the next one. Thanks for commenting!
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I wonder if Chloe has some feelings for Oliver,too? Has she been thinkig about him at least a little? Hjpe we'll find out.
Looking forward to new chapter. Oh, and of course to another updates!
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Oliver is confused about his feelings at this point - as for Chloe, more to come soon ;-)
I'll try not to take too long with the next update. I've had the flu the last few days, but I should be feeling well enough this weekend to get back to editing I think. Thanks for your comments!
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