Shadows: Chapter 5 (Part II)

Sep 07, 2012 23:19

Author: Poetgirl925
Title: Shadows
Rating: R, based on later chapters
Summary: When Chloe disappears from Metropolis, Oliver pulls himself from his downward spiral in Star City and returns to Metropolis to find out what happened to her. The Justice League reunites and with allies old and new, their search leads to a secret government agency and ( Read more... )

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poetgirl925 September 10 2012, 20:11:03 UTC
No worries about the banner, just get to it when you have time. I know how RL life can be. I really do appreciate you volunteering your time and the ones you've finished are awesome! :D

This is a big cast of characters to wrangle together, so I'm glad that you liked how I included everyone. And I like playing with parallel moments in stories - hence the one here between Oliver and Chloe. Oliver is feeling a little confused about his feelings at the moment - coupled with his worry about Chloe, it's taking an emotional toll on him. I think a lot of people's questions about Chloe will be answered in the next update, so I'm going to try to get it up soonish. I've been down with the flu for the last several days, but I'll get to editing again by Thursday (my weekend.) Thanks for your comments! :)

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rediney028 September 8 2012, 02:50:01 UTC
love this story, looking forward to the update it seems that now things started to heat up! kkk

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poetgirl925 September 10 2012, 20:12:39 UTC
I'm glad you like it! Things will definitely start heating up now lol. I'll try to get the next one up soonish - I've had the flu for the last week or so, but I want to get back to editing in a few days. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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madlenita September 8 2012, 05:57:38 UTC
Sooo, really it was Batman who kidnap Chloe...
And poor Chloe i was hoping that those two weeks would be not so scary for her....
And Ollie really wanted kissed Chloe ... And is going take another chance with Chloe...

And cold... Well this is my first September in years when i am not ill, usually 1 September comes and i have cold, feaver, and all that...
So get better... (sorry for english)...

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poetgirl925 September 10 2012, 20:16:56 UTC
I think the next update will answer a lot of questions about Chloe :) And yes, Oliver had a very surreal moment with Chloe that he can't stop thinking about now, and his feelings are confusing him b/c there is a lot of guilt and worry mixed in. But it's definitely something that comes up after he finds her ;-)

My cold turned out to be the flu (ugh) so I've been in bed sleeping for a couple of days now. I think I'm feeling better though, so back to work tomorrow. And don't worry - your English is awesome :)

Thanks a lot for your comments!

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hellzz_on_earth September 8 2012, 06:51:50 UTC
Ok, ok let me calm down. lol
Thank you, first of all for taking the time to update. With your busy schedule and not feeling well I truly appreciate your efforts.
Now OMG you brought everyone to town. The General, Martha, Lucy and now Batman is going to make an appearance. Oh and I dig that you brought in Courtney and who I think is Carter? lol
You are awesome!!!
Loved the bit with Chloe and showing her vulnerable side all alone in the dark. She will prevail I have no doubt.
I am so glad Ollie talked about his feelings for Chloe. I hope he stays true to his word and does let Chloe know how he feels when they fnd her.
Awesome update.
Happy writing.

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poetgirl925 September 10 2012, 20:23:28 UTC
You're welcome! Sorry it took me so long to respond to comments - my cold turned out to be the flu :( I've been sleeping for days lol.

This is a big cast of characters for sure - I worried that it was too ambitious, but it made sense to have them all there if Chloe was abducted. I mean, who ignores their family in a situation like that? And Martha is family too. :) You will see more of Courtney and Carter later, too.

Chloe has had an upsetting couple of weeks - I can picture her letting down her guard in that way while alone in the dark. As for Oliver, he's feeling a lot of confusing things right now, but it definitely comes up when he finds Chloe. ;-)

This should have been two chapters, but I gave you guys an extra-long one to make up for the lack of updating. I'll try not to take too long with the next one. Thanks for commenting!

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greenteam4ever September 8 2012, 09:02:29 UTC
Oh my god! Finally we've got to see Chloe. If it was really Batman who had abducted her, then why she's held in a dark room, why she's so afraid? I don't think it's like him to hold people hostages..So, ther must be another explanation, I guess.
I wonder if Chloe has some feelings for Oliver,too? Has she been thinkig about him at least a little? Hjpe we'll find out.
Looking forward to new chapter. Oh, and of course to another updates!

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poetgirl925 September 10 2012, 20:28:33 UTC
Glad you liked the Chloe teaser - I know you guys have been wondering about her. And I think all of your questions about Chloe and what happened will be answered with the next update.

Oliver is confused about his feelings at this point - as for Chloe, more to come soon ;-)

I'll try not to take too long with the next update. I've had the flu the last few days, but I should be feeling well enough this weekend to get back to editing I think. Thanks for your comments!

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