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Raison D'être

May 19, 2013 14:33

Title: Raison D’être
Author: poetbastard
Pairing/Members: Sehun, Tao
Rating: NC-17
Length: -10k
Prompt: i. & ii.

( A volatile thought or a profound trace of one’s past - They are what defines and forms an individual, a mental impression retained; Memories. And Sehun collects them. )

fic challenge, p:lukai, g:au, r:nc-17, g:?

Comments 26

eoryndal May 19 2013, 23:00:41 UTC

Wow *___* I love ghost stories!

Even though, with the way you write, I couldn't imagine the story taking place in present times and some words like airplane and super market confused me a bit because I was picturing a somewhat Victorian-esque era, I liked it very much.

poetbastard May 20 2013, 03:23:34 UTC

I was actually considering to let it take place in a past era. However, do I really not know much about how things were back then and researching about it was out of question unfotunately because of lack of time... Maybe I'll work over this after the challenge.

Thanks for the lovely comment though!

hipployta May 20 2013, 04:31:46 UTC

Taozi wants you to be happy Sehun ah...wow

poetbastard May 20 2013, 07:12:42 UTC

Yes yes~

jiushi_ai May 20 2013, 05:48:40 UTC

Very stunning and strikingly beautiful with strong and mighty words. Absolutely breataking, I really must say. c:
Impeccable job! It was very well defined and the era was different, like an older type of place to set. More of a shady part of the 1900s or a victorian 1800s feel!

Aka: I love it. <3

poetbastard May 20 2013, 07:11:53 UTC

Wow, so much praise. Now I feel ashamed that I haven't worked through it again to weed out all the grammar fucks. x)

Thank you very much for those wonderful words! Comments like yours encourage me to continue creating. c:

jiushi_ai May 25 2013, 00:20:34 UTC

Haha, it's still alright. c:

<3 You deserve it so much like you don't even know.

yutings May 20 2013, 05:58:24 UTC

why are you like this i really need to do my homework then yOU POST THIS AND DISTRACT ME I HATE BUT I LOVE YOU.

proper comment later if i live through school/exams u_u

poetbastard May 20 2013, 07:12:24 UTC

Hahahahaha GO FULFIL YOUR DUTIES! <3

rexanglorum May 20 2013, 17:53:51 UTC

Oh God... This fic is so beautifully done. And it's taohun. I just... I'll give you a proper comment later. Just... I need time to stop this god damn tears ;___;

poetbastard May 20 2013, 17:57:42 UTC

Oh dear, don't cry! Let me offer some tissues. x) <3