Carolyn had to divert there attention (again) to what they kept diverting their attention from.
Love this line!
If you don't mind a bit of concrit, a beta reader could sort out the few spelling errors and the drift from present tense to past tense on one occasion. But this is a lovely story!
Thank you very much. I don't mind the concrit at all. And you're right. *cringes* I thought I had gotten all of them. I don't have a beta reader. Normally I just try and edit everything myself but there's always something. Or in this case somethings. If you know anyone who would beta for cabin pressure fics, I'd be much obliged if you could direct my attention to them. Thanks for reading.
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And...your icon! *loves*
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I'd hug the hell out of Arthur ;)
Cute fic!
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Kudos!
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Carolyn had to divert there attention (again) to what they kept diverting their attention from.
Love this line!
If you don't mind a bit of concrit, a beta reader could sort out the few spelling errors and the drift from present tense to past tense on one occasion. But this is a lovely story!
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I so get where Arthur is coming from cause I come from a family like that. If you stand around for long enough you will be hugged.
Thank you for a lovely fluff Arthur being brill story.
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There is always the possibility of group hugs. The more the merrier I say.
Aw, you're family sounds nice. I wish my family was like that.
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