You do the creepy so well. Seriously I found myself enamoured with this while getting the shivers down my spine. Which is to say, great job!
LOL you know me and the non-con, but you do it in a way that I can get my head around. I mean Sylar still manipulates Mohinder into wanting him but I definitely see your distinction between the pheromones and Matt's ability. And I do think it's interesting that Sylar makes that distinction in his own warped way...b/c he wants Mohinder to want to be with him in some way.
Oh, wow, really? I never thought myself a very good 'creepy' writer, though I keep trying and I hope I'm improving. And yes, I do know you and non-con...And I'm so happy you seem to like mine. Like, really happy, it brings a dumb smile to my face. And yep, Sylar definitely wants Mohinder to want him, but yet he knows it'll never happen without a little push, but he doesn't want it to be mechanical. *pets Mohinder* I never seem to be very nice to him in my fics..
Thank you for reading and commenting! It really makes me feel so much better!
Erm...okay...I've read this twice...and umm...I don't like Mohinder being such a slut...it...just irks...for some reason. I should be going "Oh Yay! Smut!" but...I'm just...not...because Mohinder shifted so suddenly in character...it just threw me off...All Sylar's fault with that power... which is an interesting power... -_-;;
Other than my complete failure to enjoy that smexy scenes (maybe I'm having an off day...Hmm...*wonders*), I really liked the rest of the story with Sylar killing everyone and getting so much more powerful. Also trapping Mohinder ultimately...So good!
“Now, I’m immortal and I can keep anyone I chose alive…I’ll never let you die, I’ll never let you leave me..."
I'm quite sorry this didn't work for you. I hope I'll do better next time, this was one of my first tries into the 'willing' sex side of things of Mylar and I've realized, this just isn't my territory. I probably won't write anything else like this, but either way, it was an experience. It was because of the powers that Mohinder changed so drastically, perhaps I didn't explain it well enough.
I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story at least, and that you liked that line. So thanks for reading and commenting!
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Lucky Poor Mohinder, he's doomed to be Sylar's manslave for all eternity!
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LOL you know me and the non-con, but you do it in a way that I can get my head around. I mean Sylar still manipulates Mohinder into wanting him but I definitely see your distinction between the pheromones and Matt's ability. And I do think it's interesting that Sylar makes that distinction in his own warped way...b/c he wants Mohinder to want to be with him in some way.
Poor Mohinder! To recognize ones fate...
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Thank you for reading and commenting! It really makes me feel so much better!
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Other than my complete failure to enjoy that smexy scenes (maybe I'm having an off day...Hmm...*wonders*), I really liked the rest of the story with Sylar killing everyone and getting so much more powerful. Also trapping Mohinder ultimately...So good!
“Now, I’m immortal and I can keep anyone I chose alive…I’ll never let you die, I’ll never let you leave me..."
Hee! I love that!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the rest of the story at least, and that you liked that line. So thanks for reading and commenting!
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