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poemwithnorhyme

Eat You Alive (Oneshot)

Dec 11, 2007 21:06

Title: Eat You Alive
Author: yaoi_anti_drug
Beta: ladywilde80Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder, mention of Mohinder/Bennet and Mohinder/Bob ( Read more... )

mohinder, eat, mylar, fic, non-con, sylar

Comments 41

kael_raye December 12 2007, 03:44:18 UTC

:D :D :D

*completely speechless and completely happy*

poemwithnorhyme December 13 2007, 22:47:17 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! *is really happy* I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

ilovetbag24 December 12 2007, 03:51:17 UTC

This was some sick, sexy shit!! All that blood and gore was horrible, but the sex absolutely blew me away!! I applaud you! This was great!!!

poemwithnorhyme December 13 2007, 22:48:16 UTC

Thank you! I tried rather hard with this one, so I'm really, really happy it came out so well. So glad you liked it! *squees a lot* You've helped make my day, THANK YOU!

wistful_fever December 12 2007, 04:01:25 UTC

Dude. DUDE.

This is. *handflailwaveflop* Wowsa. Like hot, and dirty, but wrong, and I should really feel the need to at least slap Sylar on the wrists for bad behavior, but man. He's at his BEST when he's BAD.

poemwithnorhyme December 13 2007, 22:49:25 UTC

Wow, thank you! Your comment just made me grin so badly my face hurts, XD. (Most of these comments are, but your little 'Dude, DUDE' and then '*handflailwaveflop*' just made me laugh so badly)

Sylar is at his best when he's bad, he's just too sexy to deny. ^^ I'm so glad you liked it!

levitatethis December 12 2007, 04:02:45 UTC

Honestly, you're one of the few people who can do a non-con in a way that I'm not turned off by it. I mean that as a huge compliment since non-con for Mohinder/Sylar is not really my thing.

I really like the originality of the situation with this happening while other people are in the room and aware of what is going on. It certainly adds to the tension I felt reading the fic. It's also interesting seeing this type of Sylar...I mean him being hell bent on the most severe punishment isn't anything new but his behaviour towards Mohinder is incredibly cruel.

Great job!

poemwithnorhyme December 13 2007, 22:56:51 UTC

Your comment just...*falls over* WOW...

I'm so glad you still read my fics, especially since I seem to be writing more and more non-con lately...I tried some romance, but it just didn't work with the way I usually write Sylar in my fics. I keep trying, so far it's impossible for me to write and still be satisfied with the characterization, since I don't like to write when Mohinder thought Sylar was Zane or Gabriel much. I'm more than flattered that you consider my writing good enough that you'll read them and still be happy with it..*squees a lot ( ... )

mabetini December 12 2007, 04:10:09 UTC

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OH HOLY HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EXCUSE ME WHILE I GO DIE!
THAT WAS THE BEST THING EVER!

MORE?!?!

poemwithnorhyme December 13 2007, 22:58:09 UTC

Wow....*dies* Thank you so much! Your comment is so much love. Best thing ever? just...wow...wow *repeating self a lot*

I've had many comments asking for more, and I may try, but I have to have a certain muse for smut, which doesn't come often, but we'll see. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!