A collage called life

[poddarku]

A collage

Comments

[thesouth_star]

There are so many contrasting images, and they change every line. At times, it is a bit much for my head, but that may be because I am tired. It seems as if you mean to do this, to confuse the reader. It's wonderful.
Your rhythm is interesting. I like this poem very much.

[journalfriend]

As always
your writing is beautiful
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