Bones Fanfic #2: The Girl on Graveyard Island (Chapter 1/?)

[pocofuoco]

Title: The Girl on Graveyard Island (Chapter 1/?)
Author: pocofuoco
Rating: M
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Genre: Crime
Summary: A new case for the crime-fighting partners. This happened sometime during S4. Credit for the main idea goes to a favourite Japanese manga of mine.
A/N: A big 'thank you' to my dear friends for their help and support, and a special

Comments

[bearlee_there]

You are naughty! LOL Booth, Brennan and discussions of sex are always amusing. As is the circumstance of having them share a bed in one hotel room.

Great research. Hot smut. Good job! One suggestion. Break those long paragraphs up a bit. Easier to read. (Hope you don't mind me saying so.)

~Sherri

[pocofuoco]

Hey Sherri!

Yes, I've always enjoyed how embarrassed Booth gets when discussing sex with Brennan. I guess this scene just popped into my head.

Thanks for your suggestions. "Shorter paragraphs" was part of the feedback I received on FF. I've incorporated that into the next chapter. Hopefully it's better :)

Thanks for reading :)