oh my god, no one will read this

[pocky_slash]

The amount of gratuitous domestic scenes in this story is seriously starting to outnumber the scenes that are crucial to the plot. For every plot heavy scene, I swear to god I have at least one that's like, "And then Ororo did something cute and Erik was a big cuddly doofus about it."

Kait: Oh my god, this entire scene is pointless. There is no

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[bookblather]

IMO, if you legitimately think you're a functioning adult, then you are a crazy person. Functioning adulthood is a myth.

Or so I tell myself, anyway...

[count_to_seven]

I feel that you should become the new Felicia Day by writing and starring in Pantsless Pocky at Panera: The Musical.

[feanna]

"And then Ororo did something cute and Erik was a big cuddly doofus about it."

I CAN HAZ!!!!! PRETTY PLEASE!!!

(By which I mean: I would SO MUCH read the shit out of that!)