[fic] torchwood - the spine of your body and its bones - r - jack/ianto

Sep 15, 2010 00:42

Title: the spine of your body and its bones
Fandom: Torchwood (tie-in novel "Almost Perfect")
Characters: Jack, Ianto
Rating: R
Length: ~1500
Summary: In which Jack discovers he’s more comfortable with imperfection.

Notes: Written for the retconbookwrite challenge for azn_jack_fiend. Title from e.e. cummings (here). Thanks to solsticezero for being an awesome beta, as usual. I don’t ( Read more... )

jack harkness, jack/ianto, fic: tw, ianto

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remuslives23 September 15 2010, 04:54:11 UTC
This is exactly the ending I wanted from that book. Perfect!

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pocky_slash September 15 2010, 05:03:05 UTC
Thanks! :D It's a little outside of my normal writing territory, so I'm glad you liked it!

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lizzledpink September 15 2010, 05:02:03 UTC
Holy bathtub, e. e. cummings. <3 My favorite poet. Heart go poof, and I hadn't even started reading yet.

Awwwwwwww. :) Gorgeous. Adorable. Yay. "Ianto is Ianto again, with all of his Ianto parts." Oh, JACK. "I missed your dick." From him that actually sounds oddly romantic. :D

Jack/Ianto schmoop. Just what... Okay maybe not what the Doctor ordered, but it's sure as heck what I needed! :D

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pocky_slash September 15 2010, 05:08:04 UTC
There are a handful of poems that I just know and can recite portions of. There's no rhyme of reason to which poems I remember that way, but this is one of them and it was running through my head as I wrote this and seemed appropriate XD

Jack/Ianto schmoop! What even! Who even knew I was capable of this? I certainly didn't! XD But I'm glad you liked it and thank you for reading :)

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pocky_slash September 15 2010, 05:08:23 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

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temporal_witch September 15 2010, 05:12:24 UTC
Outside your normal writing comfort zone or not, this is delightful and I love it. You have such a gorgeous way with language, brush-stroking pictures in my head with the words you use. Thank you for sharing this, hon. ♥

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pocky_slash September 15 2010, 05:32:25 UTC
Oh, wow, thank you! This was a great comment to get right before bed :D I'm glad that you liked it so much ♥

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pocky_slash September 15 2010, 05:34:44 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

And, yeah, I mean, there've been a lot of Jack/Ianto post-Almost Perfect fics written, so I felt like, if I was going to go that route, I needed to look at it from a new angle. So I'm glad I succeeded there :)

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