Comments | pocky_slash: [fic] torchwood - separation anxiety: the continuing adventures of club wales - pg13

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[fic] torchwood - separation anxiety: the continuing adventures of club wales - pg13 - ianto, gwen

Aug 02, 2010 14:39

GUYS. GUYS. GUYS. GUYS. TARDIS_BIGBANG IS LIVE!

Okay. So. Today was going to be my no-internet day so I could pack, but, you know, wow. THIS IS EXCITING. I'm just going to link the fic and then babble incessantly for a bit after.

Title: Separation Anxiety: The Continuing Adventures of Club Wales
aka Club Wales II: Now With 200% More Rhys and PC Andy
Fandom: ( Read more... )

gwen/rhys, jack harkness, club wales, gwen, jack/ianto, fic: tw, ianto

Comments 12

shala August 2 2010, 19:05:15 UTC

YOU ALWAYS DO THIS WHEN I AM ABOUT TO BE SUPER BUSY, KAIT. >:(

pocky_slash August 3 2010, 05:05:08 UTC

SORRY! D:

It's not my fault! I finished the writing bit weeks ago! They just chose to post it now!

shala August 3 2010, 12:46:28 UTC

Well, it's something to look forward to, at least. "Hey, if you make it through this week without killing any family members, you get Club Wales! :D"

kel_reiley August 2 2010, 23:04:44 UTC

WHOO! congrats on finishing and i am excited to go read!

pocky_slash August 3 2010, 05:05:34 UTC

I am not entirely sure HOW I finished, but I did! I keep looking at the word count and getting faint.

kel_reiley August 3 2010, 05:17:24 UTC

hey, it took me a whole YEAR to finish IBaP

remuslives23 August 3 2010, 04:31:56 UTC

I am indecently excited about the TBB going live!

*bookmarked for when hubby leaves for work and I have some peace*

pocky_slash August 3 2010, 05:06:18 UTC

I thought I was going to pass out from nerves, no lie XD But it's there! In the world! And two people have read it! :D

shadowvalkyrie August 3 2010, 18:01:55 UTC

This was a wonderful read; thank you very much for sharing! I love your view on the dynamics between Gwen, Ianto, Jack, and Rhys (and the presence-in-absence of Tosh and Owen), even though probably because it's much lighter an happier than my own, and never fails to make me feel warm and fuzzy inside. It's also a well-plotted story, and very funny. The image of Andy walking in on Gwen and Ianto faux-making out in the closet had me laughing hard, especially with Jack's "cozy, are you?" on the phone, and Jack is always entertaining when he's being petulant.

(As a minor note of concrit I hope you won't mind, though: there are some word repetitions (double "the" and such), and some typos, for instance you have "lead" instead of "led" a few times.)

pocky_slash August 3 2010, 22:38:51 UTC

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you liked it and you laughed and and the plot worked! :D In regards to the dynamics between the trio and Rhys, I've always felt that the only way that a post-EW Torchwood could actually function would be if Gwen and Ianto were as important to each other as Jack was to them. And clearly I like that idea XD

Re: concrit: Thank you for pointing that stuff out XD By the end, I think all of us were so burnt out on the story we were missing stuff like that. Unfortunately, the story's hosted on another website so I can't edit and it's killing me. I found one, too, when I was quickly looking over it. It's tragic XD

But thanks for reading and taking the time to comment! I'm glad the story worked for you overall :)

suchthefangirl August 4 2010, 08:21:38 UTC

I cannot wait to have time to reread it yet again! (though it might take a few days, since life is so very busy busy busy).

Thank you so much for letting me be part of this. I adore the story, and have enjoyed watching it grow and change! So. Good.

(and you said such nice things about me. I did not have a great day today, so reading this made me feel way better. Thank you thank you thank you.)