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Fanfiction - I'm so sorry, I still love you...

Dec 31, 2009 15:55

Title: I'm so sorry, I still love you. (Aka - 5 times Takaki cheated on Daiki)
Author: Ritsu (crazy_otaku911)
Pairing: Takaki Yuya X Arioka Daiki // Hashimoto Ryousuke X Takaki Yuya
Rating: R
Summary: Boys are stupid, love is stupid, hearts wander, and they break.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.
Warnings: Cheating, slash, implied/vague smut.
A/N: Beta ( Read more... )

r: r, #one-shot, c: arioka daiki, c: takaki yuya, c: hashimoto ryousuke, !fanfiction

Comments 28

lavenie_2619 January 1 2010, 10:40:25 UTC

o.o you blew me up! ^.^ Congrats girl~ XD lol!

crazy_otaku911 January 1 2010, 12:57:30 UTC

Uwaa, blew you up? XD Thanks for reading!

mighty_angel January 3 2010, 08:54:17 UTC

aww poor yuya:(( Awesome writting. I like how the whole JUMP answere to the break up. (the most ryutaro and hikaru *giggles* ) really nice need to add it to my memories:3

crazy_otaku911 January 3 2010, 20:35:13 UTC

Awww, thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

virtuoussin85 January 12 2010, 01:33:13 UTC

That was really good. It's sad and I feel bad for them. Daiki and Takaki. I hope that they can get over it and be friends but I can't help it but want Takaki to be happy with Hasshi instead.
But really good writing.

crazy_otaku911 January 12 2010, 03:36:21 UTC

I imagine so. Cheating is hard to forgive, but down the line, it all melts away, I think?

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

megu13_yama January 12 2010, 02:42:14 UTC

OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!
SO ANGSTY AND FLUFFY IN SAME TIME!! GOOD JOB! *claps*
i love this!

Poor daiki, but i think hasshi is better for yuuyan, hehe. Im takahasshi fan! XD
go go takahasshi~
kinda seme!hasshi is hawt!! Love it!
and, he left a can of soda for yuuyan? So sweet!!
ah, how i missed takahasshi. I'm lacking of their fic..

crazy_otaku911 January 12 2010, 03:37:59 UTC

Yes, there are not nearly enough TakaHasshi fics. But I love them so much. OTP, yes. <3

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.

jyadan January 15 2010, 13:47:28 UTC

Ah, I love this! ;;_;; This was pretty distressing, though, but that's pretty much everything I needed right now. ♥ I feel pity for Daiki, and...

(“Just like shit happens.” Yamada had said, matter of factly.)

... is probably my most favorite part from this fic. :DDD Also

(“He's just a kid, Takaki-chan, seriously, he didn't need to see you and Hasshi-kun doing ANYTHING!”)

is something I likey-dikey. ♥ ;))) You see - I was right - I like your fics!!

crazy_otaku911 January 15 2010, 14:15:22 UTC

Distressing? D:

But <3

Haha, I had to throw some humor in, the angst was getting to me. XDD

Awww, thank you, I"m glad you liked it~!

jyadan January 15 2010, 15:49:56 UTC

Yeah! D: It was so sad and what Takaki did to Daiki made me feel bad. D: But I still liked it. ♥

And haha, you're good in putting humor into angst! XDD

You're welcome~ I love to like fics. :'DDD There's not too many good enough for me, though~