Fanfiction - An Unexpected Birthday Gift

Dec 19, 2009 16:19

Title: An Unexpected Birthday Gift
Author: Ritsu (crazy_otaku911)
Pairing: Yamashita Shoon X Takaki Yuya (Which I now dub Shookaki. :3)
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Shoon wasn't happy to see Takaki Yuya at his birthday party...but he ended up liking a certain birthday gift.
Disclaimer: This work is purely fiction.
Warnings: Sex. Yabumama.
A/N: Beta'd by shimizumiki <3 ( Read more... )

r: nc-17, #one-shot, c: takaki yuya, c: yamashita shoon, !fanfiction

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personified December 21 2009, 02:20:25 UTC
THIS IS AWESOMELY AMAZINGLY INSANELY MADLY HOT.
I think I'll ship this pairing from now on ;D

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crazy_otaku911 December 21 2009, 02:28:06 UTC
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! :D

And, and, and, you should. I'm trying to create a completely random fandom for this. An empiiiiiiiiiiiiiire.

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personified December 21 2009, 02:35:24 UTC
I LIKE IT? LIKE IT? LIKE IT?? I LOVE IT DAMN IT! D:

8D THAT'LL BE INTERESTING
An empire sounds great, and maybe add in MOAAAARRRRR Ya-Ya-Yah member with random JUMP memberrrsss

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crazy_otaku911 December 21 2009, 15:38:10 UTC
N'awwwwww, got me all blushy-happy :D

Hahaha, to be honest, I ship Takaki with all of Yax3 except Taiyou.

I'm not sure who I'd throw Taiyou in with. I haven't felt confident to ever write him.

BUT SHOOKAKI EMPIRE. WILL GROW.

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incredibly SEXY<3 kodochalover December 21 2009, 05:50:31 UTC
"To Shoon, Takaki Yuya was just a brainless idiot who was only popular because his hair changed as often as Akanishi-senpai's and his smile had this strangely attractive quality to it."

Awww hes not that bad lol xD

“What'cha guys doing? This is a partay!”

lmao!! leave it to Hikaru to be such a dorky cutie ^^
kyahhhhhh hes so adorable!

"Shoving Takaki into his room, Shoon quickly locked the door and looked at the bewildered boy in front of him,"

OMG there goes my perverted mind O__O

"At first, the kiss was just awkward, Shoon pushing into it, Takaki just standing there frozen. But after a few moments that felt like an eternity, Takaki was suddenly clutching onto him, kissing back, pressing against him. It felt good."

*NOSEBLEED* It really must have felt GOOD!!
kyahhh no fair!!!!! so freakin HOT!!! I wish i could see :X but with your clear, descriptive writing i can picture it xD

“I...like biting.”

OMG :O Takaki is kinky ^^

"Suck"...The JUMP boy moved willingly down between Shoon's legs, hovering over his perking length."damn ( ... )

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Re: incredibly SEXY<3 crazy_otaku911 December 21 2009, 15:42:41 UTC
Wooooow, long long long comment. I love it. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING IT. AND LIKING IT. <3

I have a tendency to shy away from plain smut. Comedy, romance, or angst should always exist in the story as well.

Ahhhh, I've written one other Shookaki fic. They're random, but I happen to ship them rather strongly. xD

Thank you for reading it, thank you for liking it. Mwah~ <3

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kodochalover December 21 2009, 05:51:54 UTC
P.S:
Who's the girl with Jin on your header image?? was it like a magazine shoot or something?
ive never seen it before O__O and now im curious lol

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crazy_otaku911 December 21 2009, 15:44:28 UTC
I have no idea. I just got the layout from...uh, wherever I got the layout. *can't remember*

I think it was a mag shoot, because I think....I think Kame and Junno have similar....shoots floating around? I don't know. Sorry.

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virtuoussin85 December 22 2009, 01:51:05 UTC
I didn't think I would like that pairing, and yet, surprisingly I really really enjoyed that. I was just looking for a little something to read, and found quite a gem. Really good. I really did enjoy that a lot.

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crazy_otaku911 December 22 2009, 03:32:46 UTC
They're my rarepair. ^^

Thank you so much for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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ladestiny92 December 24 2009, 04:24:52 UTC
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! XD SDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL

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crazy_otaku911 December 25 2009, 00:29:43 UTC
I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT! ♥

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