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crazy_otaku911 in pocky_addiction

[One-shot] The madness within

Jul 23, 2012 22:30

The madness within
HSJ - Gen
2515 words, NC-17, Battle Royale AU
Trying to be soundless in the middle of a forest wasn’t easy. But it was be silent or be killed.Well, it's one of those things you never think you're going to write especially when you've never actually read the book or watched any of the things, but it somehow seems like a good idea ( Read more... )

c: yamada ryousuke, c: okamoto keito, c: nakajima yuto, r: nc-17, c: arioka daiki, c: yaotome hikaru, !fanfiction, c: chinen yuuri, #one-shot, c: yabu kouta, c: takaki yuya, c: inoo kei

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inferi26 July 24 2012, 04:23:22 UTC

WILL.NEVER.LOOK.AT.CHINEN.THE.SAME.WAY.AGAIN.

and inoo too but chinen is worse kfdsmfdf

This is brilliant. ;______;

and I like how Yabu and Hikaru paired up together. ;u; shipper heart okay. |D

crazy_otaku911 July 24 2012, 23:25:28 UTC

Haha, oops 8X

XD It seemed for the best, to have them running together. And.. meeting their fate together 8(

Thanks for reading! ;; ♥

kumonoaakoi July 24 2012, 06:54:16 UTC

noo takaki!

where did put them why would they shot each other

nande????

crazy_otaku911 July 24 2012, 23:28:08 UTC

On an isolated island, with collars that have explosives. Death is a very persuasive threat.

x: Thanks for reading!

itapan July 24 2012, 12:40:29 UTC

asfeuhjngfl;kgfkashd;swjg;kwjglksfhjdgkljerfgvkjsdlk this was so painful but actually so good but OHGOD. WHY. It's so sad I can't even WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO CHINEN AND WHY DID YAMADA HAVE TO KILL YUTO AND HIMSELF.
But like... seriously good jooobb~

crazy_otaku911 July 24 2012, 23:30:30 UTC

Well, to explain (if you don't mind a bit of rambling) it's just that Chinen is so calculating. Not that I think he's really capable of murder, but I feel like he's best at compartmentalizing and if there's that big of a threat, that real of a threat, you know? As for Yamada, I think he just didn't have any hope left, so he did all he could think of at that time.

But thank you! I was a bit all over while writing it. But I'm glad you liked it (even if it was sad and painful x:) ♥

itapan July 25 2012, 13:02:47 UTC

Mmm yeaaahh when I think about it... Chinen kind of... seems like the most likely to do that D; LOOL~~...
Poor Yama chan thoougghhh~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ TT^TT TT^TT
But I think everyone was actually like... pretty in character?? Like somehow I could imagine them being like that............ ><><><>< Sooo painful though~~ TT^TT But really good~~ :D:D

crazy_otaku911 July 25 2012, 15:09:34 UTC

He does, doesn't he 8X;;;

It was really sad, writing Yamada's part, but I'm really glad to hear you say that about the characterization, because while I'm generally confident with Yamada, I'm not at all with Inoo, so his part was a bit more complicated for me!

:D ♥

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tsubasa_quill July 24 2012, 15:48:23 UTC

OMG, this was dark and twisted and written in such an eerie kind of beauty ~ brilliant!

I was utterly shocked at every para :P Depressing how everyone died and the emotions, Yuto's eyes Takaki's despair and the way Ryosuke ended his life. Chinen was scary! And the part with Inoo caught me off guard since it seemed like those three would have been fine and only have Chinen to worry about ~

Just wow...

crazy_otaku911 July 24 2012, 23:32:55 UTC

Oh my goodness, thank you! x:

It was... surprisingly easy to write, I'm not sure why. Everything just fell into place, even if it's definitely not a happy piece at all.

But thank you! I'm glad you liked it - at least the writing ♥

angelofhikari July 25 2012, 18:43:08 UTC

You do realise, that you have to make more one-shots like this, do you? ♥
I always knew Chinen was perfect for roles like this.
You almost killed me by killing Keito off first!! (it's probably for his own good, Keito is too sweet)

I absolutely loved this!! >.O

crazy_otaku911 July 27 2012, 03:26:31 UTC

Well, it depends on which part of it you liked so much and want recreated XD! I doubt I could produce anything so similar, but certain elements...
But yes, Chinen was just so perfect... which sounds bad, but you know 8X;;
I honestly was just like D8 I don't know what to do with Keito, but there are all slight reasons behind each killing and everything, so Keito's fell into place soon enough. (He is such a sweetheart ;o; I love him ♥)

Thank you so much! ♥♥♥ I'm glad you liked it so much :D

angelofhikari July 30 2012, 19:43:06 UTC

Hmm..just make something with Angst and Drama in it and I'll be happy~
Chi is the mastermind behind everything in my mind, that's why he fits roles like this.
I know, it makes sense. But damn, I would feel angry at getting killed out of the blue XD

lot's of hearts for youuuuu~ ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

crazy_otaku911 August 1 2012, 20:44:39 UTC

Ooh, as it is, I have two different HSJ wips that are rather angsty and dramatic :3 Keep an eye out! ♥

Man, I would to, he didn't have a chance! D8

♥ Aw, thank you so much! :333