Comments | plotqueen: Fic: Stormswept (David/Selena) M/NC-17 (2/2)

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Fic: Stormswept (David/Selena) M/NC-17 (2/2)

Nov 05, 2009 09:34

Title: Stormswept (2/2)
Author: chaosdragon
Pairing/Character: David/Selena
Word Count: 12,634 (total)
Rating: M/NC-17 (mild sexual situations, cursing)
Summary: He's pretty sure that things like this only happen when scripted. He never really considered that life is stranger than fiction, or that all fiction has its basis in reality.

( Stormswept (2/2) )

fan fiction, david x selena, rpf, wizards of waverly place fic

Comments 16

sofia666 November 6 2009, 06:59:47 UTC

this was EPIC! DavidSelena. I loved every bit of it- but especially the ending- and the sex. and I loved-
“Then lets see how it works out for the next twenty or thirty years.”
great writing. <3!!!

plotqueen November 6 2009, 15:26:53 UTC

thank you so much. i'm glad the ending was appreciated, as well as the whole piece. thanks for the r&r.

blushingsigh November 10 2009, 16:04:25 UTC

THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AWESOME RPF FICS THAT I'VE READ.
I will ermm ... leave you a proper review once I get my power nap :).

plotqueen November 11 2009, 16:44:45 UTC

thank you! very glad you enjoyed it :D

blushingsigh November 13 2009, 16:43:07 UTC

Okay, this is totally my David/Selena fix, I enjoyed it so much from the beginning to the end. I loved every bit of it. There was something so wistful and realistic but their push and pull (and haha David, you wanna ravish her). I have no idea how stranded people actually live their lives but I think you did a good job. Thank your good senses because you acknowledge things like morning breath and the unpleasant things about sex in the beach. And David, you douchey gentleman, it made me go aww when he was guilty but Selena reassured him and they went at it again. I have a lizard brain, I am very easy to please XD.
The last parts were my favourite- there is that sadness that accompanies their relief and it really hit me. And I also loled when Selena had to take the tests.
The thing made me sure that this was going to be my David/Selena fix was the part where they reunite. It's so damn heartwarming that I want to take it to bed and cuddle with it.
She doesn't wait for him to tell them to fuck off, she tells them herself, and David loves ( ... )

plotqueen November 20 2009, 19:15:02 UTC

wow, that's such a great review. i really did want to try and convey the issues that being lost at sea could bring realistically, but i was afraid i was being too detailed. glad to know that i wasn't. i'm very pleased you enjoyed it, and the last parts best of all. personally, i liked david's last part best out of everything i wrote :D thanks for the r&r, it made my day.