The Worst Journey in the World Part One

Jun 15, 2009 09:07

A bit late to the party, here is my contribution to plot_wout_porn. I'm posting it in parts one after the other, in one big lump, a poll on my LJ having determined that most people would prefer that (not that I've had any option really, as I've been away all weekend).

Title: The Worst Journey in the World
Author: shapinglight
Prompt: From a prompt by bruttimabuoniFandom: Buffyverse ( Read more... )

c: buffy, f: buffyverse, c: spike, c: wesley, a: shapinglight

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hello_spikey June 15 2009, 19:36:45 UTC
yay! It's lovely.

Though now I'm like, oh, were we supposed to take a prompt for this? Because I didn't. *sheepish*

Re-reading is absorbing. My reaction to Wes is way different this time through. All I can think is: The poor, brave man! :D

Um, you know, looking at another comment, I realize that Buffy's "eating for two" thought might be construed in an incorrect, pregnant sort of way. :P

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shapinglight June 15 2009, 21:23:05 UTC
Thanks again for all your help.

Though now I'm like, oh, were we supposed to take a prompt for this? Because I didn't. *sheepish*

Oh no, that was only for those of us too lacking in imagination to think of anything for themselves. :)

Um, you know, looking at another comment, I realize that Buffy's "eating for two" thought might be construed in an incorrect, pregnant sort of way. :P

This is true. peasant_ wanted me to leave it out, but I thought in the end it would be self-explanatory so I left it.

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thatotherperv June 16 2009, 00:29:58 UTC
"Bleargh!" He spat again. "Fucking dog hairs - get everywhere."
Buffy stared at him.
"You bit them?"
He shook his vampire features away, though his human face looked just as irritable.
"Only the one. You know which. Gotta keep remindin' him who's boss."
you had me at hello. christ, you made me WHEEZE. awesome.

and I'm totally on pins and needles about where this is going. can't wait for the time to read more tomorrow!

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shapinglight June 16 2009, 12:51:04 UTC
Hi there. Glad to know you enjoyed the first part. Hope you like the rest.

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trepkos June 16 2009, 07:59:43 UTC
I get the feeling there's more to that sled dog than meets the eye!

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sammywol June 16 2009, 09:15:20 UTC
It's 'Butcher's Camp'. Kill the dogs to feed the other dogs. Something Scott-worshiping Britain took decades to forgive Amundsen for.

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shapinglight June 16 2009, 12:53:46 UTC
Yes, wasn't quite cricket or something.

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shapinglight June 16 2009, 12:51:31 UTC
Well, you have to watch him. That's for sure.

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sammywol June 16 2009, 09:14:03 UTC
Wow! this is fascinating. sueworld2003 pointed me over here saying I must not miss out on this. She was right. I love how you get so much backstory and exposition in without ever doing the 'pause now for info-dump' thing. Good writing.

I listened to a dramatisation of The Worst Journey in the World on Radio 4 last year. It included some of the nightmare and hallucination sequences from Cherry-Garrard's later diaries as well as the original book. Yikes! Hope that that's not what's following them.

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shapinglight June 16 2009, 12:52:50 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it. Avoiding info dumps is tough so I'm glad you think I pulled it off.

I love Cherry-Garrard's book. Also, Sara Wheeler has written a wonderful biography of him. Have you read it?

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kseenaa June 16 2009, 09:30:53 UTC
Well now. That was one interesting start. What a plot! Wait... Is it supposed to have a plot? X-D

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shapinglight June 16 2009, 12:53:22 UTC
Is it supposed to have a plot? X-D

Hmm, let me think about it.

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