You Love Until You Don't, You Try Until You Can't

May 21, 2008 22:41

Title: Broken Heart Tonight
Author: plazmah
Fandom(s): Bones
Pairing(s): Camille/Zack
Rating: PG
Summary: I knew the day I met Zack, he'd cause me pain.
Author's Notes: Spoilers for Pain In The Heart. Unbetaed. I don't own Bones or any of the characters, duh. And I'm not sure I even like how I've characterized Cam and Zack in this. I guess I just like my ( Read more... )

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a2zmom May 22 2008, 03:30:39 UTC
I really like this.

I hated the episode to be honest, but this makes a lot of sense.

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kinseyjo May 22 2008, 03:35:07 UTC
wow dahlingks. just... wow. you know, the idea of them in a relationship freaks me out on some level, but you make it so... good. i loved it! :) i hope everyone else does too.

when cam made that comment monday night, i was like WTF is she talking about?! and this would make soooo much sense.

pure win. :)

xoxo
Kinsey

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plazmah May 22 2008, 13:55:53 UTC
when cam made that comment monday night, i was like WTF is she talking about?!

Hee, I was all "Did she just imply what I think she implied?" Hence this fic. ;D

Thanks!

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only_more_love May 23 2008, 15:20:07 UTC
Hee, I was all "Did she just imply what I think she implied?"

That was my reaction, too. :)

This piece is creepy, wonderful, and plausible; I love it. Great work.

She just wants him back, wants the eager, innocent, and utterly sweet Zack she's always known to show up at her front door again, hands in his pockets and a shy look on his face

Those are my thoughts, too. I just want him back. :(

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plazmah May 22 2008, 13:56:25 UTC
devastatingly in character

Wow, thank you!

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plazmah May 22 2008, 13:58:23 UTC
*HUGGGGGS* I have seriously watched Cam’s words and reaction in the final group scene a billion times and I get choked up every time by how hurt she is.

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makd May 22 2008, 04:32:53 UTC
Brava! So very much in character for both of them: no sex, just warmth and cuddling...and still no connection from Zach....

Gonna go add this to today's post!

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plazmah May 22 2008, 14:02:44 UTC
Thank you!

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