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renichifreak November 24 2009, 21:37:04 UTC
It’s harder, when you have two parts of yourself. I get so used to talking out of my other mouth, sometimes I forget which one I mean to speak through. What words go into which. I need to be more careful, I don’t want to say something stupid to the wrong eyes.

This is beautiful, Love~!!!!

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holykeebler216 November 25 2009, 00:52:33 UTC
thank you :)

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kitkii November 24 2009, 22:32:35 UTC
Reading this after reading this, it just makes it have even more weight. A lot to dwell on. I think everyone wants to be loved, no matter how hard that actually is.

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holykeebler216 November 25 2009, 00:52:16 UTC
I really want Eeteuk to find someone special. I think that's the one thing in his life that he wants more than anything, is to have a wife and a family with her.

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kitkii November 25 2009, 01:01:48 UTC
same. i feel bad every time he talks about it because i know there will always be something that keeps that dream from being true.

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hecate0o November 25 2009, 01:46:37 UTC
well, i noticed he's looking for his love in his cyworld.. love ur story.. yeah, it is more easier to be half of your personality

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holykeebler216 November 25 2009, 03:04:29 UTC
yeah, I really hope he finds it ♥

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ameliorate23 November 25 2009, 06:21:20 UTC
Wow~ That was brilliant, Jess.

Um, I can't even quote any of it because I'd end up quoting all of it....

But, the imagery was perfect and phrases like the colors lifting and wafting off of them and their clothes like smoke and the style it was written in with the repeating invisible statements and the I’d like to love, you know. I think I said that already. just wow....

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holykeebler216 November 25 2009, 07:33:27 UTC
Haha aww thank you~, it's been so long since I wrote fic that I have no idea what's even good anymore XD

(...my roommate is talking to herself right now, two feet away from me. It's annoying.)

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annedee08 November 25 2009, 10:23:36 UTC
oh wow. that was wonderful.
i think i understand what eeteuk's going through. XD

lovely work~ ^^

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holykeebler216 December 1 2009, 09:29:19 UTC
thank you :)

mm, i really hope the best for him. hopefully his journal entries will perk up soon <3

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