Comments | platinum_alice: [DRRR!!] for a voice that can't be heard. -- shinra/celty.

manriicabaeju in platinum_alice

[DRRR!!] for a voice that can't be heard. -- shinra/celty.

Jan 07, 2011 08:13

Series: Durarara!!
Characters/Pairings: Shinra-centric, ShinraCelty.
Notes: Been writing this fanfic for... months. I finally feel like I've gotten it to a good place to let it rest, but at the same time, I'm not sure how I feel about it. /:> I think there's a ton that could be fixed or taken out or improved or even added... but I dunno. I guess it ( Read more... )

dysfunction shouldn't be so fun to write, durarara, one-shot, otp, why am i so depressing, disconnected feelings are beautiful, fanfiction, i like creepy characters?

Comments 9

ezcap1st January 7 2011, 16:52:56 UTC

Nah, I think the way you put Shizuo in there fits! And this fic is wonderful~ It gave me better insight as to how Shinra is as a human.

manriicabaeju January 7 2011, 19:11:46 UTC

Really? I'm so relieved; I was worried that it was kind of "Celty Celty Celty Shinra moar Celty SHIZUO HEY THERE" xD; Thank you so much! <3
I think my headcanon is kind of... well, I usually can make characters pretty dark, so. xD; I'm glad you liked it! <3 Shinra's really interesting to write, so I had a lot of fun with this.

mirachiii January 8 2011, 04:30:50 UTC

The fic was good! :) It really delves into Shinra's thought processing. I never thought he could view Celty that way and the characterization was perfect. Shizuo was a win. haha xD

manriicabaeju January 8 2011, 21:56:32 UTC

Thank you so much! ;w; I'm glad you liked it. <3
I was startled by how he looked at Celty when I started writing this. I felt like I might have made it too dark or too twisted, but I just kind of... went with it. :'D And it was pretty smooth going once I got started from there.
LOL. I love Shizuo, putting him in was fun. I was just worried if it was correct or not.
Thank you again for reading. ;w; I appreciate it. <3 <3

mirachiii January 9 2011, 04:51:24 UTC

the shizuo saving shinra's ass bit was good actually. It felt really in character. xD

confusedstalker January 8 2011, 10:37:23 UTC

Lovely work! I mean, it's pretty hard to put things into Shinra's POV. (I know, I've tried xD)

Everything just blends in perfectly with one another! Awesome stuff with when you put Shizuo in there too ^^

manriicabaeju January 8 2011, 21:54:55 UTC

Th-thank you! ///; Shinra is... definitely an odd duck. He's surprisingly easy for me to get into, but at the same time, I'm unsure if I make him too dark.

I'm glad! 8D I was really worried that he was just kind of out of nowhere for people.

rocketsciences January 9 2011, 21:00:39 UTC

i think that the insight you gave into shinra's imperfection is pretty spot-on, and celty and shizuo's characterizations were pretty well-done, too! shinra's pov does seem a little glum here, but he is fallibly human and he is hopelessly in love with this beautiful and almost untouchable urban legend, so it's fitting, really. :D

i love how you specifically noted that he isn't kind and selfless; i think many people tend to sidestep that.

so yeah, good job!

manriicabaeju January 10 2011, 19:02:27 UTC

Ah - thanks. ;w; I was worried about his voice being too .. dark, but I'm glad people liked it. Shinra's normally a bright, cheerful to a fault character type, so I was wondering if people would accept my view of him or not. xD; I'm glad it felt okay to you! <3 Thank you so much.

Guh, yes. As far as I can tell, a lot of people do. But thanks. :'D <3
I really appreciate your comment! ;w;