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Third Kiss (1/1)

Nov 08, 2007 03:24

Title: Third Kiss
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Word Count: 1925.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: Through 1x04, "Pigeon."
Characters: Ned/Chuck, Emerson, Olive, OC.
Excerpt: Chuck loved early mornings in the Pie Hole. She loved them almost as much as she loved late nights in Ned's apartment, drinking tea and eating pie and watching old movies, snuggling in adjacent ( Read more... )

pd: emerson, pd: minor characters, snoggage, pd: ned, pd: chuck, pd: olive, pd: ned/chuck, pushing daisies

Comments 53

palmaceae November 8 2007, 11:01:05 UTC

that's a really great idea, and makes a lot of sense. i'd love to see that happen on the show. wow.

ninamazing December 17 2007, 00:13:36 UTC

Thank you so much! I am really glad you enjoyed it and your comment made my day. :)

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agentotter November 8 2007, 20:15:30 UTC

Just beautiful. The voices and the tone and the characterization and everything. I am slightly in awe. Okay, maybe more than slightly. You rock. And the payoff was bone-deep satisfying. (I think eventually the UST on the show is going to actually kill me.)

I think my favorite bit was the line about Chuck's aunts teaching her to dance, and how they were surprisingly unsteady on solid ground. Just fantastic.

ninamazing December 17 2007, 00:14:08 UTC

Thank you SO MUCH. :DDD Your beta was great, and I'm glad you approve of my changes.

Plus, I fucking love Ned. Who doesn't??

<333 HEART.

toughlovebaby November 8 2007, 11:56:04 UTC

that was a great piece :) interesting concept though - i'ld love to see that on the show later down the track :)

ninamazing December 17 2007, 00:14:31 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed it. And yeah, I'd love for them to do this for the finale or something. :P

intrikate88 November 8 2007, 12:52:28 UTC

That was absolutely fabulous. Very much in character and true to the style of the show. <333

ninamazing December 17 2007, 00:16:54 UTC

Thank you SO MUCH! Wow. That was exactly what I wanted to do with this story, so I'm really glad you thought I did well. <3 That's good to hear ESPECIALLY from someone who was so awesome in sonic-tea.

Actually, why aren't we friends? *friends you* :D

intrikate88 December 17 2007, 02:48:44 UTC

I do not know why we weren't friends before this! *friends you back*

andsheloves November 8 2007, 13:21:21 UTC

Ohmygoodness. That was just- so- fantastic? Wonderful? Beautiful? Brilliant? Seriously. This is- ♥

ninamazing December 17 2007, 00:17:47 UTC

EEE. *blushes* Thank you so much! Your comment TOTALLY made my day. I'm glad you liked the fic!!