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Flavors (1/1)

Oct 21, 2007 20:33

First of all? DUDE, this isn't even the idea I was already working on. This totally jumped into my head after dinner and wrote itself just now. I kind of love having two such ADORABLE people in my head ( Read more... )

pd: emerson, pd: chuck, pd: minor characters, pd: olive, pd: ned/chuck, pushing daisies, pd: ned

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austen October 22 2007, 00:58:31 UTC

This is just perfect. I think my favorite was the blueberry; however, Ned's rambling about trauma and burning was just spot-on.

ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:00:26 UTC

YAY! THANK YOU! *dances* I thought "Blueberry" might be the redheaded stepchild of this drabble bunch, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it. And God was I hoping this was in character.

:)

austen October 22 2007, 01:09:00 UTC

Oh no, I adored it. And I have a feeling this fandom is going to produce plenty of fic from me in the future. :)

ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:10:44 UTC

Oh, this fandom is going to take over my LIFE. And hopefully everybody else's lives, too. ;)

Fantastic icon!

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julia_thorne13 October 22 2007, 01:00:34 UTC

"Well, you're also supposed to not touch me," Chuck retorted, and she placed a tiny kiss on the tip of his shoulder. Ned closed his eyes for a moment, but she pretended not to see.

I gasped aloud when I read that bit. I think that's such a beautiful image and I can't get it out of my mind.

ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:02:00 UTC

Oh, wonderful. That's one of the best compliments I've ever received, and it FILLS me with squee. Cheers and thank you so much for your comment!

madkrazyghetto October 22 2007, 01:00:50 UTC

::FLAILS:: ::A LOT:: You, my dear, are awesome. This is awesome. I just... it... ::flails:: It's so subtly sexy, and the tone and the voice are just so right, and I had my doubts about PD fic in general, but I figure if it's all written by you, the world is golden.

ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:02:45 UTC

YOU APPROVE I AM SO HAPPY THAT MAKES ME FULL OF AWESOMENESS

I was hoping so hard I'd gotten it right. I had my doubts about writing PD fic, too. BUT THE IDEAS. THEY WON'T LET ME GO. :DDDDD!

*mad hugs*

noblealice October 22 2007, 01:02:12 UTC

OMG! I adore this! It's just so cute! I thought that every new vignette was my favourite until I would read the next one.

I love your depiction of Emerson, convinced that he's just not rolling his eyes enough and needs to glare instead!

"Well, you're also supposed to not touch me," Chuck retorted, and she placed a tiny kiss on the tip of his shoulder. Ned closed his eyes for a moment, but she pretended not to see.

That line KILLED me with the super sweet shoulder kiss. This couple is going to be the death of me, I'm sure of it.

Lovely fic, I hope you write more because you have a grasp on BOTH the third person narrator and first person perspective with Ned!

One last thing, I grinned at this: The Womens' Charity Charity Women. &hearts

ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:04:36 UTC

OH YOU. I'M SO EFFING GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS SO MUCH. :DDDDD Thank you times ten million! I am squeeing.

*punches air* It's all about the super sweet shoulder kisses. I do that with my childhood best friend. ;)

I was totally hoping the Womens' Charity Charity Women would please people. <3 So I love you for that.

Also -- I really got Ned and the narrator? YAY! I mean, YAY TIMES YAYNESS SQUARED! *dances*

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ninamazing October 22 2007, 01:12:11 UTC

YAY I'm so glad to hear it! :DDD That makes me very happy.

Yeah, I love whenever Ned talks. I was all over that line. :P

Again -- thank you for your comments. I really appreciate them!