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Heroes and Reality (1/1)

Aug 30, 2007 22:49

Title: Heroes and Reality
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Word Count: 534.
Rating: PG.
Spoilers: Through 1x10, "Peace? Off!"
Characters: Robin/Marian.
Excerpt: If she pretended not to notice the way Robin's lips tightened when she said "Sir Guy," Robin could pretend not to notice that she had noticed.
Author's Note: For jazzfic, whose writing got me watching the show ( Read more... )

rh: robin/marian, rh: marian, robin hood, rh: robin, ficlet

Comments 16

jazzfic August 31 2007, 08:57:12 UTC

*claps wildly*

You are just fantastic. Your enthusiasm for this show is inspiring and makes me happy indeed. I love this, especially the way you wrote Marian's point of view.

This I really liked:

"Oh, Robin Hood," she snapped, looking into the distance as if she couldn't bear to see him in front of her. "You listen to peasants crow about your deeds and you live your life as if you were a legend."

Doesn't he though? And wouldn't it be a different world for them all, if he didn't.

Now...admission time:

"I have nothing to tell you," she said. "Sir Guy has - wisely - been holding his tongue around me, I think."

Okay, my brain went to a rather naughty place there. I blame Richard Armitage.

ninamazing September 1 2007, 03:30:18 UTC

You SO win for reading my story. YOU SO WIN. :DDDDD And I am currently working my way through your latest. It is so exciting to read your fic now that I know the fandom!

I'm so glad you liked that bit of dialogue ... because it was that, crawling into my head, that started this scene in the first place. :P

LOL. Richard Armitage is kind of hot, isn't he? If it weren't for my now-eternal devotion to Jonas and Gisbourne's unfortunate habit of killing people, I'd probably be fantasizing about him too.

*CLINGS TO ROBIN HOOD*

Thank you so much for making my day and commenting. :)

drunkendreams September 4 2007, 01:27:31 UTC

Oh lovely characterisation. You've captured the Marian-Robin banter ( and Marian's voice) so well.

ninamazing September 11 2007, 07:03:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I took a lot of time with Marian's voice, so I'm glad you think so. And I love your icon. :)

boy_named_susie September 4 2007, 02:08:53 UTC

Awesome scene between the two of them. I loved the last line.

ninamazing September 11 2007, 07:03:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it.

funkyinfishnet September 5 2007, 10:17:45 UTC

*claps* this is a great 'cut scene' from the show, it truly felt like it was from an episode. You capture the characters and their speech brilliantly. I really like this. Good job :- )

ninamazing September 11 2007, 07:03:58 UTC

Thank you so much! *bounces* I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate your high praise. :)

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ninamazing September 11 2007, 07:05:00 UTC

(OH MY GOD, I ADORE YOUR ICON. :P )

the supply of good r/m fics is thin.

Really? Oh, good! I'm just getting into this fandom and was worried that I'd be boring just wanting to write R/M ... but that's what's tickling my muse right now. I'm glad you want to read more, because I'm working on something else!

Thanks so much for leaving a comment. :)