Title: Afterburn
Part: 1 of 1
Author:
ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Legend of the Seeker
Word Count: 1090
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Through 2x08 "Light"
Characters: Cara/Kahlan
Excerpt: She was never sure afterward how it started with Cara and her; she only knew that when it ended she was eager for the next time.
Author's Note: For
deej, at long fucking last! My
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"I never got an infected wound," Cara muttered
This bit! As I was reading along I thought it was a random forest scene, but then it was a sudden revelation that this was the amazing ‘Do Not Practice Agiel Field Medicine, Kids’ scene! And then it was instantly doubly-delicious because the whole visual was already there in my head omgggg.
And I love the way you describe Cara's long proud features and their fingers in each others hair and - TOO HOT. Unf. I already cherish it!
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YES THIS IS TOTES POST-PAINPLAY SEXIN' FOR OUR HEROINES. ;D I am sososo glad you enjoyed, you have no idea. I cherish these characters and this pairing and this SHOW, omg. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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YES. WOW. So gorgeous.
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I really liked this line:
Her dangling hair ensconced Kahlan's head in a sort of golden prison.
I also liked and how Kahlan is always on top - EXCEPT when it comes to Cara. I think that it really speaks to their relationship that Kahlan allows Cara to take that dominant position because she knows she likes it and how much trust she must have for her.
This is another excellent line:
Sometimes Cara was a nine-year-old again, eyes wide and burning blue, searching for something she would never find.
Man, I hope you keep writing for this pairing because you do it SO WELL.
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All kinds of hotness this was. There really aren't words to explain it. I loved it, especially this
"Better?" she murmured. There went that eyebrow again.
Kahlan suppressed her own shiver, and caught Cara's hand.
"I would be," she said, "if you joined me."
Such perfect Kahlan/Cara dialogue, that I love you a little bit for it. Great job.
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