Out of the Night (1/?)

Aug 09, 2009 22:25

Title: Out of the Night
Part: 1 of ? (5 or 6 probably, depending on your interest)
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica/Firefly
Word Count: 1386
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Through 3x17 "Maelstrom" for Battlestar; post-BDM for Firefly
Characters: Kara Thrace + our Big Damn Heroes (in this chapter: Mal, Simon, Zoe, Kaylee)
Excerpt: She's lucid ( Read more... )

ff: kaylee, ff: simon, crossover, ff: zoe, battlestar galactica, xo: out of the night, adventure, firefly, bsg: kara, ff: mal

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squaringkarma August 10 2009, 05:56:03 UTC
I got others to explain it for me and I can't wait for more! ♥ you!

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le_mru August 10 2009, 08:05:55 UTC
Fantastic and hilarious :D I'd definitely sign up for more chapters. The characters' voices were done really well, I immediately knew who was speaking.

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astraevirgo August 10 2009, 16:56:53 UTC
I have been told to watch BSG so many times, but this might actually make it happen? I'll have to go to the Torrent Store soon.

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ranee42 August 11 2009, 01:43:52 UTC
YES YES YES FIREFLY + BSG = MOTHERFRAKKIN' WIIIIIIIIN!!!!!!

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frolicndetour August 12 2009, 00:26:52 UTC
I like this story a lot; very believable reaction from Kara, perfect voices for the Firefly characters (and that's got to be so hard to do; I love Firefly but I'd be terrified to write it) , and I can't wait to find out what happens next. One minor thing: since this is a Kara POV story, it threw me off a little bit when she sounded like a Firefly character. Like here: "You are trying my patience, little man," says Kara, flopping back in the gurney. "And I ain't drinkin' whatever's in that cup." I don't think we've ever heard Kara say "ain't" on the show, so it seemed a little off. And when she didn't like the "sheen" of the look between Mal and Simon? That's just a minor thing though.

I particularly love the way you write Simon and Mal. :D

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