Rewriting Recollection (1/1)

Mar 09, 2009 04:21

Title: Rewriting Recollection
Part: 1 of 1.
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Word Count: 777.
Rating: R.
Spoilers: Through 1x10 "The Hand of God."
Characters: Helo/Athena.
Excerpt: At long last her world is closing in so he is all that it contains.
Author's Note: Writing on a plane is even better than doing aerodynamics homework on a ( Read more... )

snoggage, bsg: athena, bsg: helo, battlestar galactica, adult-rated, bsg: helo/athena

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jazzfic March 9 2009, 09:38:21 UTC
*meeps*

You slay me, Nina, you really do. And the last line! It's so simple but it means so much. Thanks for posting this (and for using your flight time for writing!)

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ninamazing March 11 2009, 06:02:43 UTC
:D :D :D :D

No, YOU slay ME. With love! ♥ Thank you so much for commenting. I am so glad it worked for you.

And psh, writing while flying is totally me indulging myself and not being productive. WHICH MEANS IT IS DELICIOUS TO BE THANKED FOR IT. THANK YOU. :D

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rebelliousrose March 9 2009, 11:46:39 UTC
This makes me glad that Daylight Savings Time has messed up my sleep schedule.

with moans spilling from her throat like accidents,
If you are reading very fast, very early in the morning, this line can be read as "with moans spilling from her throat like antiacids" with unintentionally hilarious results.

I really enjoyed this; I always do with your fics. I especially respond to the desperation Sharon is feeling, to the possibiity of Helo's loss. Cylons don't understand permanent loss, and Sharon is learning it in a really harsh way.

repr0b8 is the one responsible for the Moments at Kindreds. And Kindreds itself.

Question; of his chestnut curls weaving through her fingers.
Do you picture Tahmoh with curly hair when it's not cropped? There's been a fandom debate for years.

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ninamazing March 11 2009, 06:06:15 UTC
Oh, yay! My sleep schedule is always messed up, so - welcome to the fold. :)

If you are reading very fast, very early in the morning, this line can be read as "with moans spilling from her throat like antiacids" with unintentionally hilarious results.

ROFL ANTACIDS. Yeah, she went rooting around in the med kit and just took random stuff. For kicks. ;)

Cylons don't understand permanent loss, and Sharon is learning it in a really harsh way.

That is very true. I am so glad all of the stuff I was thinking about came out in the fic ... thank you so much for your comments on it. :) Oh, Sharon Agathon. She is my hero! She makes such good decisions!

[info]repr0b8 is the one responsible for the Moments at Kindreds. And Kindreds itself.

reprob8 is my new hero! I can't believe one person collected and coded all those moments. That's dedication.

Do you picture Tahmoh with curly hair when it's not cropped? There's been a fandom debate for years.ROFL - I was wondering as I wrote that if I would enter some giant hair-related fandom debate. I think ( ... )

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leiascully March 9 2009, 20:16:44 UTC
Sometimes I kind of hate you. With love, obv.

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ninamazing March 11 2009, 06:06:41 UTC
YEAH, WELL I LOVE YOU WITH LOVE ALL THE TIME. :P

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leiascully March 11 2009, 15:10:09 UTC
:D I LOVE YOU ALSO WITH LOVE. AND TEEF. JUST LIKE THE DOG.

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ninamazing March 11 2009, 06:07:59 UTC
THANK YOU SO MUCH. I adore exuberant comments! :D :D :D :D

"GIVE THESE KIDS A FRAKKING BREAK!!"

OMG, no kidding. I have so much Helo/Athena therapy fic in the works, you have no idea. WHY WOULD THEY DO THIS TO MY AGATHONS. I CRUMBLE.

It very much sums up her character, in that she becomes an individual instead of just another Cylon.

Oh yay yay YAY. I tweaked that bit a lot, and it's so gratifying to know that what came out works! Thank you thank you!

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liveonthesun March 10 2009, 00:58:26 UTC
NEW COMMENT.

I love this. Ridiculously. ♥

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ninamazing March 11 2009, 06:08:32 UTC
"OMG, someone commented just when I was complaining about how no one was commenting!" :P

I LOVE YOU RIDICULOUSLY. I AM SO GLAD YOU ENJOYED THIS. GLAD LIKE BURNING. :D

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