Eve (1/1)

[ninamazing]

Title: Eve
Part: 1 of 1.
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Word Count: 534.
Rating: Light R.
Spoilers: Through 3x01 "Occupation."
Characters: Helo/Athena.
Excerpt: "Tomorrow," he murmurs, against her skin.
Author's Note: It was really important that I get a good night's sleep tonight, so naturally, I completely ignored bedtime and

Comments

[trovia]

Heh. Who knew that Helo is such a romantic! :)

This is very cute. I love your visuals. Also, your Helo is very hot which I find amusing because Helo is, like, the last man on Earth I'd feel attracted to (contrary to Sharon, who is smoking hot). I still love him, and I write him a lot. But not usually because he's hot. ;)

[ninamazing]

HE SO IS. He can't fool me. ;)

Thank you so much for the comments! That makes me super super happy, because visuals and hotness were two of my main goals. :) Both of the Fighting Agathons keep me up at night with their hotness, but Helo is my main man atm, so I'm glad I was able to convey that. HE IS HOT. :D

Thanks again.

[sabaceanbabe]

This. Is. Beautiful. Gloriously beautiful. And I adore this line: She can hear the rhythm of her breath and his, out-of-phase waves that commingle and cancel each other into universal flatline.

Thank you so much.

[rebelliousrose]

Dude, she's like your long-lost fanfic sister sometimes. Trovia, are you an SB sock? ;}

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much for reading, and for leaving such a great comment! ♥ I may or may not have started delving into other people's Helo/Athena fic, starting with yours, so this feedback means even more coming from you. :)

[sabaceanbabe]

Helo (and Helo/Athena) is what drew me into BSG in the first place and I'm so loving seeing all of this new Helo/Athena fic, so thank you.

If you haven't visited yet, you should check out the Kindreds Forums. It's all about the Agathon love (well, and a little of everyone else, too, but mainly the Agathons). :)

[rebelliousrose]

Oh my god, if you don't run over to www.bsgkindreds.com and post this in the fanfic section so the Helo/Sharon fans over there can read this.....I'll, I'll, I'll- I don't know what I'll do, but I'll be upset about it. This is just beautiful, and it's exactly what I needed to fall in love with Helo all over again (as if there was any danger of falling out of love with him ever) and *flaily hands*.

It smells of sulfur and dust, but it's only the eve of the ceremony, the uneventful day before: There's no pressure tonight.

gives her his gentle tongue. She opens her mouth - she wants to taste all his sweetness at once,

"We're going to live forever, you and me," he says at last. "After tomorrow, our souls don't go anywhere without each other."

long, lean, home

There is so much ravishing language here that I don't even know where to begin.

[ninamazing]

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ OH HOW I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS.

I am getting to it! I am! I am! My life is craaazy right now - I am in the middle of a move - so I haven't been able to spend as much time discovering Kindreds as I would like, but I am definitely going to post these there soon! And I'm still grateful to you for the heads-up.

I am so glad you liked all this. I have been frantically writing Helo/Athena; my muses seem to be completely STUCK on it, as though I'm afraid it's going to be Jossed before the end of the series or something, and when I write that much I'm afraid my language gets stale. So it's nice to know that at least you still approve. :)

[sabaceanbabe]

Dude. You and me both.

[ninamazing]

I pretty much need to marry Helo ... yesterday.

[mamaboolj]

Yes. What rebelliousrose said. Your language and visuals and just everything was stunning.

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! ♥ I am so super glad that you liked this that much, and I WORRY about my language and visuals, so this is ever so nice to hear.

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought so! And I LOVE THEM TOO. *joins in hug*

And nice Dollhouse icon. :D