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Next Step (1/1)

Feb 01, 2009 15:33

Title: Next Step
Part: 1 of 1.
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Veronica Mars
Word Count: 662.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: Through 3x13 "Postgame Mortem." Ish.
Characters: Veronica/Mac.
Excerpt: The girl in question snuggles against her side. It's something you can do when you've known a person for almost three years, but Mac feels it keenly: Veronica's ( Read more... )

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Comments 24

noblealice February 1 2009, 21:41:46 UTC

It was the wobbly mix of determination and helplessness that people never noticed until they learned to look for it - the only visible clue that Veronica needed something.
Yes! I love the mention of her inabilty to ask for help and people just have to guess or know. OH MAC. You are so insightful and awesome!

They can't help laughing. And then the laugh goes on for a second or so longer than either of them expected, and there's nothing to follow it up, so they just stare at each other in the dark, loose inside their shirts.
This is such a solid line. I can FEEL it and it really works.

ninamazing February 19 2009, 07:55:16 UTC

SHE SO IS. And such a good friend to Veronica. ♥

Oh, thank God! I was so nervous about that part. But I really felt that was the only way it could work in this scene. THANK YOU SO MUCH.

*loves*

intrikate88 February 1 2009, 22:13:36 UTC

Ooh! I like this so much- you really write them so naturally together, and it WORKS. Love it. :)

ninamazing February 19 2009, 07:55:34 UTC

Oh, YAY! Thank you so much! I am thrilled to hear that, especially from you. :)

xperiment314 February 2 2009, 01:10:53 UTC

Nice

ninamazing February 19 2009, 07:55:44 UTC

Thank you! :)

idella February 2 2009, 02:35:54 UTC

Okay, I barely know who Veronica is, and I don't know this Mac at all (though I would like to), BUT IT DOESN'T MATTER, BECAUSE I STILL LOVE THIS.

Because of your mad storytelling skillz (I like how there is plot, and your ending is yes, this) and how you create interesting characters for me, and especially ESPECIALLY your images, like Veronica's legs and underwear and spine (there must be appeal in writing about a character named Veronica, mustn't there?) and "loose inside their shirts".

And I must insist that you write f/f more often. Really. IT IS PRACTICALLY A CRIME THAT YOU DON'T.

ninamazing February 19 2009, 07:58:42 UTC

OH MY GOD I LOVE YOUR COMMENTS SO MUCH. SO MUCH, DUDE. YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW. ♥

I am so glad you liked this - and I am especially glad that you pointed out those specific things, because gahhh, all of that makes me so proud! I was hoping people would like my descriptions of Veronica, especially the spine one. :D Yum yum yay.

And you should definitely watch Veronica Mars. You would love it, because it is the best/smartest show ever. Start with season 1.

I wrote Inara/Nandi one time! Did you ever run across that? That was my first girlslash, and I enjoyed it so dearly. Ever since then it has been one of my Great Goals to write more more f/f! I am just limited by lack of experience. :(

idella March 4 2009, 06:39:22 UTC

VM is definitely on my list. As is your Inara/Nandi fic. (I have given up reading fan fic for Lent, so it will be a while before I can get to it, but I will let you know what I think when I do!)

mosca February 2 2009, 06:42:48 UTC

Very very sexy and lovely.

ninamazing February 19 2009, 07:59:10 UTC

Thank you so much! It means an epic lot to hear you say that. :) Or, read, whatever ...