Barndoors (1/1)

[ninamazing]

Title: Barndoors
Part: 1 of 1.
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Battlestar Galactica
Word Count: 665.
Rating: R.
Spoilers: Through 1x10 "The Hand of God."
Characters: Helo/Athena.
Excerpt: All the recollections of her time in the fleet seemed crystal-bright before, but now they're dulling next to something as trifling as Helo's scent.
Author's Note:

Comments

[ninamazing]

You win for commenting and covering my heart in Helo-like warmth. ;)

But then we wouldn't really have any more... plot.

Ahahahaha. How right you are. BUT IT'S TRUE. Especially when you know what is waiting back for both of them on Galactica. D:

Although, his devotion to her even in the face of NO MOAR SEXYTIEMS is another big reason I love Helo (and this pairing) so. effing. much.

FIGHTING AGATHONS ♥

[ninamazing]

Yes! Exactly! They had to talk to each other on phones through a glass wall! D:

Sharon spent the majority of her pregnancy, alone, in a cage, without her partner there even to give her footrubs, she was chained up when she was brought ANY where else

SO TRUE. And not just chained, but chained, like, eleventy times. It's so disconcerting, actually, because she's just this tiny sweet-looking girl, and she's in leg and NECK irons for frak's sake. I just kept watching like, "IS THIS REALLY NECESSARY?! JESUS HECTOR CHRIST."

Although to be honest, I am sort of maybe in the process of writing WishFulfillment!porn where Helo sneaks in while the guards are asleep and they make up for a little lost time. Because the pornbattle is like speed for my muses.

THIS WILL BE DONE.

UM, OHMYGODS, DEFINITELY. YOU ARE A GENIUS. :)

[rebelliousrose]

This is sexy and wonderful and gorgeous and I love Helo/Rainfic like burning.....

his warm possession feels like a damn good reason for betraying even her brothers and sisters. I love this line; there is so much going on in this one sentence it's like "guh".

One small thing; Helo's eyes are green, as any self-respecting Helo dork can tell you (which I totally am)and this is even more dorktastic of me, but they were both wearing flightsuits up to this time in the story and the jacket and pants mentions pulled me out of the story a little- and I wanted to be in this story all the way, baby!

Don't suppose you'd consider posting this in the fanfic forum at www.bsgkindreds.com; it's a site devoted to Helo and Sharon. And this is too good to not share.

[ninamazing]

Dammit. Why did I think their flightsuits were two-pieces? Is it because I am ... dumb? (Possibly.) You know, I did rewatch the scene in "The Hand of God," but I was, um, so distracted by their hotness it was not entirely productive.

ANYWAY. For the other thing, I am so goddamn bad with eye color, and my internet cut out, so I had to sort of look at screen caps and guess. But thanks for the correction! I WILL TAKE YOUR WORD FOR IT. :D

I am so, so glad you liked this, and thank you so much for leaving a comment. I appreciate it immensely! ♥ I will definitely consider posting it at Kindreds - I am just starting to get into Helo/Athena, but I would love to share my fic around. Again, thanks!!

[rebelliousrose]

No, it was b/c like the rest of us, you were so caught up in the awesome porn you were writing that you forgot the details!

For what it's worth, Kindreds is having a "Tainted Love" Ficathon- the prompts are cheesy song lyrics and the story is angst......http://www.bsgkindreds.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1760

I love your writing.

[ninamazing]

THANK YOU FOR THAT EXCELLENT PHOTO WHICH I CAN NOW USE FOR SCIENCE and FACTS.

:D

How exciting! I just registered at Kindreds today, so I am going to do some exploring. I tend to stick to LJ because I can only deal with one addictive internet community at a time, but I venture outwards occasionally. ;)

And thank you so much for the compliment on my writing. I'm so happy that you like it! ♥

[ninamazing]

I miss those days, too! MMM, RUNNING AND DIRTINESS. Thank you so much for your comment; it made me so happy! ♥

[weissman]

You should post this at

http://www.bsgkindreds.com/

its a great story!!

[ninamazing]

Thanks for the tip! I think I will!

And I'm so glad to hear you liked it. :)

[weissman]

Of course

[weissman]

Of course

[mrsdrjackson]

This is great, I love the romance of rain and sex. At this point they are so alive together and there is hope in the chaos. Well done!

Helo's eyes are green though, not blue.

[rebelliousrose]

If you look upthread I was super-anal about Helo's eye color too! ;}

[mrsdrjackson]

Sisterhood of Tahmoh strikes again. *giggle*

I will add my voice to the "post this at Kindreds" shout. It's just what we need.

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! ♥ ♥ Love your icon, too - that is such a gorgeous moment.

I'M SO ASHAMED I GOT HIS EYES WRONG. *falls over* I was working with a blurry screencap, though, on a non-color-corrected monitor ... does that count for anything? :P