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Finally (1/1)

May 04, 2008 00:26

Title: Finally
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: The Office (US)
Word Count: 1491.
Rating: PG-13.
Spoilers: Through 3x23, "The Job."
Characters: Jim/Pam.
Excerpt: She beat his high score at pinball while they were waiting for the pie to bake, and the way he leaned into her to fake-sabotage her moves reminded her of the time (so long ago) when he'd picked ( Read more... )

to: jim, to: pam, snoggage, to: jim/pam, the office

Comments 25

sonni89 May 4 2008, 08:28:27 UTC

Thank you. This was brilliant!
I have tears in my eyes... That's such a beautiful fic. :)

ninamazing May 6 2008, 20:42:38 UTC

Oh my God, thank YOU. :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I can't believe I brought tears to your eyes -- you made my day with that, seriously. :)

lipsoflove May 4 2008, 09:13:49 UTC

That was beautiful. Perfect story, perfect lines.
It was like poetry.
Great job.

And there will never be enough of JAM fluff. The more, the merrier.

ninamazing May 6 2008, 20:43:03 UTC

Wow. Thank you so much. SO MUCH. :DDD

And I'm very glad you feel that way. Jam fluff FTW!

falulatonks May 4 2008, 10:51:16 UTC

This was absolutely lovely. :D It's come to a point where every time I think oh, no, not another post-Job fic, I read it anyway, and get disappointed - this has been the first in a long time where I finished with a huge smile on my face. Being able to make Jim smile like that was a talent she'd thought she'd lost. - just - yes. :) Gorgeous [the way it's written, the way it reads], in-character, and everything I hope the actual date was. :D I absolutely loved it.

ninamazing May 6 2008, 20:44:33 UTC

Oh, thank you so much. :D I know exactly what you mean -- post-"Job" fics are everywhere, but I just couldn't help myself.

I'm so, so glad it worked for you, even with everything else you've read. :)

chinesebakery May 4 2008, 10:55:26 UTC

That was gorgeous. I absolutely loved it.

ninamazing May 6 2008, 20:44:47 UTC

Thank you so much! :D I'm so glad to hear that!

lisahoo May 4 2008, 14:32:44 UTC

Jam fluff is just what the world needs right now. (We've SEEN the ring, ask her already, dammit!!)

"There was never going to be a right time." *melts*

Another favorite part: He kissed her like she was alone in his narrow field of view, like he was bringing her with him somewhere and didn't want to leave any part of her behind.

You should post this over at MTT, I know a lot of folks there would love to read this.

ninamazing May 6 2008, 20:46:11 UTC

(OH MY GOD I KNOW. WHEN WILL IT COME.)

God, I'm so glad you liked those two lines -- I remember debating them in my head and trying to figure out how to word them. Heh. *_*

Thanks for the tip about MTT! What a great site. I did in fact post it over there -- and am hoping to post more in the future. :)

Thank you so much for your feedback. I think it's obvious that I really appreciate it.