Be Kind to Animals - Kiss a Beaver (1/1)

[ninamazing]

Title: Be Kind to Animals - Kiss a Beaver
Author: ninamazing, or Nina
Fandom: Pushing Daisies
Word Count: 1261.
Rating: R. Very R.
Spoilers: Through 1x03 "The Fun in Funeral," kind of. Mostly just if you want to understand the origin of the title.
Characters: Ned/Chuck.
Excerpt: Ned's eyes looking down at her now seemed darker than the black of his shirt or

Comments

[ninamazing]

Naturally. ;)

I always bounce for joy when you comment. YOU ARE THE BEST; have we discussed that? :DDDDD

I suppose I should have that reaction when they get too close. Maybe I would if I weren't writing this, 'cause I know I'd never do that to them. I'm just like "SEX SEX SEX, THEY DESERVE SEX, THE UNIVERSE COULDN'T POSSIBLY DENY THEM."

Yeah, it is a bit like "Corpsicle." I went back and rewatched old ones today to dispel some of that sadness so I could write SEX. But I guess some of it crept back in.

You're welcome times eleventy hundred. I love you. <3

[ninamazing]

I had no idea it was your birthday! :DDD It's like the universe was conspiring to make you happy! I'm so glad I was able to throw you a bit of joy -- I really appreciated your comment. :)

Thank you so much for all your feedback on this. I'm SO GLAD you like my Ned. :DDD And yes, daring Chuck seems the only way to go -- in my own personal fantasies Lee Pace tends to slam me up against a wall and go at it, but I think Ned might be a little more timid. Ahem.

Anyway, thank you so much ... I really appreciate you pointing out all the things you like, as it helps me get better. :D

[ninamazing]

:DDDD

I'M GLAD WE'RE AGREED ON THAT.

[noblealice]

His eyes were quickly getting that oh-God look - nervous, excited, nervous, lovesick, hopeful, nervous - like was holding his breath everywhere.
This is my favourite line in the fic.

I liked the image of Chuck's cheek-impression on the glass, it's just something everyday and mundane that these two make beautiful.

Also, the thought that they each have good and bad days with their situation makes total sense, I liked that.

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! :D

I really try to evoke the cinematography and style of the show in my fic, but it's not always easy ... so I definitely appreciate your feedback. (That's what I think I was doing with the cheek impression thing. :P )

Good and bad days are what make real life trying, and they don't exist in fiction usually ... but then, PD has a way of making real life seem more like fiction.

[synaesthesiakid]

I like stories where she gets into the bed naked and teases Ned. This whole show is one long tease. I like your last paragraph; so symbolic and wraps up the story well. Also "I think we've used that square of plastic wrap for all it's worth." Good line. Ima look for more PD fic from you.

[ninamazing]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback, and I'm so glad you like the way I ended it -- endings can be hard for me.

This whole show is one long tease.

You got THAT right.

And if you're interested, I have a whole backlog of PD fic you can read. Cheers for tags!

[pieholer]

It took me several minutes after reading this to have a coherent thought! So hot and so very possible. If I were one of them I'd do anything to rid of some that frustration. Very nice use of plastic wrap. I especially like that Chuck asked after how the plastic wrap felt - that's SO her!I so love reading your fics - it's helping me get through to September.

[ninamazing]

Oh my God, that is so exciting for me -- I'm so glad you liked this! :DDDD And I really, really appreciate the detailed feedback.

It feels like September will NEVER come ... but I'm doing my best to keep writing fic so that interest for the show doesn't wane. I'm super-glad to hear it's helping. Thank you so much. :DD