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[moonishlips]

the unmagnificent lives of adults (countdown)
one-shot | bandfic, jaechun, unrequitted jaesuchun, pov jumpage, airplanes, implied drug use and su-angst; PG-13. (2142 Words.)
mild inspiration from the song mistaken for strangers by the nationalthis is a hot mess and an attempt to force myself out of my writing-funk and i'd be surprised to see anyone

Comments

[jaeluvsme]

Oh Junsu. Too much love but still not enough. <3 And jaejoong resorting to drugs (how did he get thru security?)

&hearts

and those lil jaechun moments. They just understand each other, in a way that junsu never could.

How you can make a 40 min flight turn into a story is beyond me.

YOU WRITE AMAZING FICS AND YOU SHOULD BE PROUD OF THEM.

And i really hope you get a new beta soon. Don't want you to waste your talent.

[moonishlips]

Junsu ♥

Annddd JaeJoong getting through security... heh heh. It's my happy little fallacy :'D

b'aw b'aw /blushes and hugs. I need you around like forever, srsly.

i'm on the vigorous hunt for a beta. i hope i get one soon, too

Thank you thank you thank you so much bb. For everything. ♥♥♥

[jaeluvsme]

I'll be around forever, so don't worry ;)

D: stop thanking me, you silly child. I did nothing.

[xsuju_addictx]

I SEE JAECHUN, SO IMMA READ.
*goes to read*

YEAP, ITS JAECHUN.
SADGASKDJAGSHDKJASH
OMG....... THEIR INTERACTIONS.
OMG, JUST JUST. OMG.
SAHDFASUKDGAS IT WAS SOOOO WELL DONE,
DO MORE JAECHUN AND YOU'LL SEE ME HERE.
:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!

[moonishlips]

lmao jaechun is my otp :D

I'm glad you liked it ^^

[moonishlips]

Thea! Thank you! ♥

[moonishlips]

Junsu is so cute and pathetic. I want to hug him but sometimes I look at him and then the want to hug is gone.

thank you ♥

[weerainbow]

*breathes again*

Oh sweetie, you really broke my heart with this...so much. You know how I love my Junsu and the way you wrote him was just so...aching. But I couldn't stop myself from reading either, you caught me in your net and I had to read right to the end and hold my broken little heart together.

You know what was really amazing about this though, what really fascinated me? The fact that it seemed like time stood almost completely still. In fact, when I came upon this:

"The silence is driving him insane - a remaining thirty minutes feel like eight hundred eternal years on repeat, with delays and coasting and laybacks and extended time."

...I stopped in shock because only a couple of paragraphs before that I'd been wondering how you had made time go so slow that it seemed to stand stil!!! Honestly, it was kinda freaky how spot on to what I was thinking that sentence was!

Well I'm off to find me some cute Beast video to heal my heart (ok, it's not quite that bad, and I totally forgive you for breaking it but I'll still go

[moonishlips]

Aaaaah nuuu why is it I always break your heart ; - ; one day I'll be a good dongsaeng and make you smile, I promise! *tape & glue & hearts*

That's pretty trippy, tho. I was trying to figure out what the mood for this was, seeing as I kind of just wrote for the sake of writing something and didn't put too much thought into it, but in retrospect, you're absolutely right. It feels... slow. I think maybe it's the flight-dialogue intermissions that help with that, because they keep pulling your mind back to the beginning. Could be wrong tho.

LMAO GO! Watch Beast videos and roll around in glitter with pancakes! :D :D :D Thank you so much for commenting, dear. Really means a lot to me to see you're still interested in my writing :D

♥

[weerainbow]

Well I see it as a good thing that you're able to break it because it shows that you have a depth of emotion in your writing that gets to me. See? I can look on the bright side of life ^^

Yeah I think the flight-dialogue parts really make it obvious that time hasn't moved on and so makes the slow pace more tangible. But also I think there's just something in the feeling of the piece that can't really be put into words...

Hehe glitter and pancakes sound good, though not together because I prefer maple syrup with my pancakes ;o) And of course I'm still interested! You've been one of my favourite writers right from that first story of yours that I read!! You're right up there at the top of my list! *squishes you*

[moonishlips]

B'aw honey ♥ ♥ ♥

POV jumping... Short sentences, maybe? :| I want to figure it out so I can do it again.

and what are you talking about, glitter and pancakes are like, the greatest combo since honey and lemon.