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And Then There Were Slightly Fewer - Part 7

Jul 12, 2010 19:45

And Then There Were Slightly Fewer
Author: plainapple
Rating: PG -13 (with skippable NC-17 chapters)
Pairings: Shawn/Lassiter
Wordcount: Exactly 23,300
Warning: MUR-DER! and man love
Disclaimer: This is fan fiction, I make no claims to the copyright ownership of Psych or to its characters.
Chapters: 1, 2, 3 (porny), 4, 5, 6, 7
Summary: “Come on Lass,” ( Read more... )

psych, shawn/lassiter, rated: pg-13, and then there were slightly fewer, slash

Comments 19

identity99 July 20 2010, 07:39:14 UTC

OMG. you made me the murdering psycopath. How rude. XD

...I would have totally gotten away with it, though. Just sayin.

Nice ending though hahahahah

*clickclickclickclickclick*

plainapple July 20 2010, 10:58:50 UTC

(considers trying to convince you again that Tina is _not_ you, just a character that shares a name, but gives up.)

Well of course I made you the killer! All the best guest star spots are villan rolls. A nice turn as a mulit-murderer is the only sure fire way to win yourself an Emmy nod. Or whatever the psych_slash equivalent of an Emmy is, I don't think there is one, but if there was - you would win it.

identity99 July 20 2010, 21:31:37 UTC

((I know, hun, I'm just screwing with you <3))

But of course! *gets writing on her acceptance speech*

identity99 July 20 2010, 07:45:55 UTC

Never mind. I don't like bottom!Lassie (not that I'm not certain you will write it amazingly!).

The story was awesome! Strangely, the fact that Shawn and Lassie seemed weird was something I liked. They are so romanticed and perfect all the time.. They seemed a lot more life like and real in this.

I enjoyed it! :)

plainapple July 20 2010, 11:08:13 UTC

Frankly, I'm not crazy about bottom Lassiter either, especially with a top Shawn, but it had to be done! (from a narative standpoint)

I do like writing shmoopy luv-dove Shassie, but sometimes you want something a little meatier, ya knows? Besides, a perfect relationship is just one that hasn't been tested. It's easy to love someone when things are going well, I wanted Shawn and Lassie to love each other enough to get through some bad times too.

Anyway, I'm all done with that business! No more casefic for some time, I think. I've exhasted everything I have to say about Shassie. Until I change my mind and reboot the series with a whole new how-they-got-together story (allow four to six months for delivery)

That doesn't apply to smut, of course. There's always more to say about smut. And there are so many unfilled kinkmeme prompts out there... *tear*

identity99 July 20 2010, 21:20:05 UTC

It was needed. *is really tempted to read it even though it's a squick of mine* Damn you, Plainapple!

Yeah, I know what you mean. Like I said, I really liked it!

It'd be cool to read a story where they showed Shawn and Lassie, not perfect or lovey dovey, but kinda dysfunctional with sex and fighting and Lassie sometimes demeaning Shawn and Shawn annoying Lassie, but then something bad happens (kidnapped, held hostage) to Shawn and the solidarity of their relationship is shown.. *brains runs a million miles a minute*

Mmm.. Psych!kink.. I need to check that meme more often! I forget.

plainapple July 20 2010, 22:48:18 UTC

Naw, I wouldn't read it if I were you. My heart wasn't in it so I think it came out more intellectual than hawt. Meh, mleh, bottom!Lassie. I'm gonna have to write a whole top!Lassie bondage club spectacular to make up for bottoming him. ;)

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tera_gram July 22 2010, 20:14:43 UTC

I love murder mysteries and I loved this fic. Great use of the classic tropes.

plainapple July 22 2010, 20:30:50 UTC

Did you just double-down screen name comment this fic? (checks page 8)

Hah! You totally did! *grin*

Thanks! It was pretty fun to toy with the idea of Agatha Christe does Psych ;)

water333 December 5 2010, 23:56:42 UTC

Hahahaha!! That ending was funny.

The story was ok..I didn't really take to that BI*CH that called Shawn a 'you know what'..I'd hope she was the killer since I didn't like her that much; but I did think that the sister was fishy.

Now, the soul brother/ford gets everything and that really doesn't SIT will with me either..

Overall, an ok story..

Sincerely,

plainapple December 16 2010, 17:36:57 UTC

Yeah, too bad about Ford, but we can't have perfect justice all the time!

Thanks for reading.

moonlady3000 December 1 2011, 05:55:50 UTC

In my head, this takes place in the same universe as Tera-Gram's 'Lassiter learns how to bend' series.
It matches up so well in my mind.

There needs to be more fanfics like this. I love case-fics with established Shassie. Peeeerfect.

plainapple December 1 2011, 07:12:01 UTC

Hmm, I hadn't thought about it but you're right, there are some thematic similarities. I tend to think of my three case fics as a loose trilogy as far as the progression of Shawn and Lassiter's relationship goes but I don't get as deep into character as Terra does so it's not official or anything.

There do need to be more casefics! You know speaking of Terra a while ago she wrote a lovely how-to essay on writing Shassie casefics but I'm not sure if it's spawned any children yet. I very much hope it does!

(I just checked - she actually wrote it over a year ago. Dang it! I only found it last month! It's the iternets best kept Shassie secret!)