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And Then There Were Slightly Fewer - Part 4

Jul 12, 2010 19:34

And Then There Were Slightly Fewer
Author: plainapple
Rating: PG -13 (with skippable NC-17 chapters)
Pairings: Shawn/Lassiter
Wordcount: Exactly 23,300
Warning: MUR-DER! and man love
Disclaimer: This is fan fiction, I make no claims to the copyright ownership of Psych or to its characters.
Chapters: 1, 2, 3 (porny), 4, 5, 6, 7
Summary: “Come on Lass,” ( Read more... )

psych, shawn/lassiter, rated: pg-13, and then there were slightly fewer, slash

Comments 9

identity99 July 13 2010, 02:36:32 UTC

Your last chapter is mini'd, jsyk. But I'm really tired so imma go to sleep. Finish my reviews tomorrow :D

plainapple July 13 2010, 10:46:36 UTC

Why does that happen? It's the same size in the doccument I paste it from. Livejournal is so mysterious sometimes.

identity99 July 13 2010, 02:38:46 UTC

Also- Your journal should say "Write down that it was yellow and slashy." LOL. <3

plainapple July 13 2010, 10:49:21 UTC

Hee. I thought it was time to switch to a more recognizable Psych quote, although I still think "Lies, lies, lies, lies, yeah!" was the best line Shawn's ever uttered.

randomrubixcube July 19 2010, 18:09:19 UTC

Last line is pure win xD
I love it all so far. The guys are all as adorable as ever and it's well written and damn suspenseful, even when it's not about murder and deadly accidents.
I mean, seriously, will he or will he not finish the Triple Tower?
I shall read on to find out ;)

plainapple July 19 2010, 18:43:52 UTC

I really feel that the tripple tower is the star of this whole story and I'm surprised you're the first one to pick up on it. Maybe I didn't emphasize well enough that it's three buttery golden thick and round pancakes with homemade whipped creme in between each layer. And there's a dollop on top. With not one, not two, but THREE cherries.

Just thinking about it makes me wanna go to sleep so I can wake up and have breakfast.

randomrubixcube July 19 2010, 20:30:37 UTC

I'm surprised no one else noticed. I mean, he did ask for it to be on a waffle. Can't get much clearer than that.

Or just forgo dinner and lunch and make it a breakfast day, all day, every day.
Well, possibly not every day.
Homemade whipped creme has to be made with love and care, can't rush it.

identity99 July 20 2010, 06:52:27 UTC

I most definately momentarily got distracted/died a horrible death/was lost in confusion. I'm back from the brink now, though :)

*goes to read*

I wasn't in this chapter, damn. XD The only problemo I see is the finally chapter is minimized again O.O *glares at LJ*

plainapple July 20 2010, 11:15:49 UTC

I don't know what to do! It's so wierd, it shows up as mini on my phone but regular sized on my computer. I went in to fix it but it showed itself as already at the same size and font. Is it a screen resolution thing? I don't understand. It's so confusing :(

(PS I'm glad you're back! I was worried I'd offended you with the character I gave the Tina name to, but seriously, look at your other options, you would have either been senile, a total bitch, or dead. I guess I could have made you the waitress? Naw, you're specialler than that.)