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Who's Your Diadem?

Aug 15, 2010 17:56

Who's Your Diadem?
Author: plainapple
Rating: NC-17
Pairings: Shawn/Lassiter
Wordcount: 2,143
Warning: daddy!kink, spanking, SPOILERS: Shawn and Gus in Drag (Racing)
Disclaimer: This is fan fiction, I make no claims to the copyright ownership of Psych or to its characters.
Summary: Lassiter goes all corporal punishment on Shawn post-Shawn and Gus in Drag ( Read more... )

psych, shawn/lassiter, bdsm, rated: nc-17, daddy!kink, slash, porn

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plainapple August 16 2010, 00:40:33 UTC

Yeah, I know, it's pretty mean. I really was going to wait to do a nice loooong daddy fic but I needed to blow off some steam with porn.

Because I am, busy, the worst kind of busy... packing to move busy. Sorting through all my crap wondering why I've kept some of this stuff for years and am only now getting rid of it busy. Trying to figure out what's worth trying to sell and what's just trash busy. Hauling boxes up and down stairs busy. Ulugh. Packing.

It's good to purge though. Liberating and what not (I'm so ready for it to be over and I'm barely even started). Ulugh.

I think the only reason Shawn tried to get in the car was to get Lassie's attention. He gets jealous when Lassie talks to Gus. Double jealous, because it's his boyfriend stealing his bestfriend and vice-versa.

I'm glad you liked it. I think it reads like a cheesy porn movie. All it needs is a pizza delivery guy.

Maybe in the sequel....

Oh, and icons? Made of win.

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Re: Moving sucks so much. plainapple August 16 2010, 05:47:26 UTC

Want!

First Shawn shows up on Lassiter's doorstep as a pizza delivery guy, then a plumber, then in his Chad package delivery outfit, each time under the guise of looking for tips about his porn case. Lassiter, being Lassiter, thinks Shawn's just being his usual idiot self, but he slooowly starts to catch on once he sits down with some of the studio's films himself (just to look for evidence, of course), and sees each scenario acted out (and he can't help but imagine Shawn in each role as he does). Big finale: Lassie shows up on Shawn's doorstep dressed in his old policeman's uniform.

Want! Want want want!

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anonymous August 16 2010, 22:53:08 UTC

I sorta kinda feel like an intruder right now...

Hm, kinda hot in here...
I don't know why you think you failed. In fact, you should write some more, I think. The last line screams for a sequel.

Ohyes, sequel please? *puppydogeyes*

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plainapple August 16 2010, 23:13:17 UTC

It's no problem and it's no intrusion! I looove feedback, even on the stories I'm not quite feeling. It's a pretty good PWP, it's just the one I wrote just before this one was better and I always try to top my last story. Maybe I'm too hard on myself... But it's the only way to achieve excellence in porn!

Thanks for reading and for commenting. It makes me feel much better about it to know someone enjoyed it! :)

:-)REVIEW MACHINE anonymous August 20 2010, 04:42:53 UTC

This was frickin' hot. I wish I could write this well. I think my eyes had an orgasm ( ... )

Re: :-)REVIEW MACHINE plainapple August 20 2010, 11:09:18 UTC

D ( ... )

Re: :-)REVIEW MACHINE anonymous August 21 2010, 01:33:50 UTC

Thank you for replying to me! I always get so excited to see that. I defs. need to make an LJ account. One of these days...

Yeah, the fanfiction.net story you probably wouldn't have seen because I felt shamed and deleted it right away after the mean review. If I could go back in time I would have kept it up proudly.

I looked up that song on youtube! I loved it and may very well try writing something one of these dayzz.

I will now go explore and get my review on in some of your other fics!

dlasta August 20 2010, 11:00:49 UTC

Filthy *awesome*. Extra million points for the D word.

Guh.

plainapple August 20 2010, 11:15:35 UTC

D word is 100% Rispacooper's influence. I've been so corrupted! *crocodile tears*

Hooray for guh's!

dlasta August 20 2010, 15:26:39 UTC

She gets around with that D word. ..which is a good thing.:)

Enjoy the corruption and the company it brings. Tears are for when your reputation is gone entirely and we're all blaming you for our disgrace.

*nods*

plainapple August 20 2010, 15:41:51 UTC

I can see it now...

"plainapple has brought nothing but shame onto our fandom! Shame onto Shawn! Shame onto Lassiter! Shame onto livejournal, onto it's users and it's icons! Shame!"

I'll be run out of town on a rail. I've never been a pariah before, I don't think I'd take it well. You're right, there will be tears.

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